1-2 Chapter Reviews. IMMEDIATE RESPONSE [for small payment]

Let’s cut to the chase. I’m offering to read your first two chapters of your book and leave 3 (or more) sentence comment in exchange for a small payment. I will leave the comments in the section rather than inline comments. However, I have a few rules:

RULES
(1) I have to accept you before you complete payment
(2) Genres I will not accept: Horror, LGBT, mature romance, or poetry
(3) PAYMENT MUST BE COMPLETED AFTER I ACCEPT YOU.
(4)PAYMENT: One sentence (or more if you’re feeling generous) comment on the first chapter of my book, The Wash Complex. It’s a short chapter, don’t worry. Please make the comment constructive. Not just “I like it”.
(5) Fill out the form correctly
(6) I have the right to deny you without any explanation.
(7) If you read all the rules, please add the password (Beautiful Times ) to your form.

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Title-> Distance
Genre: YA, simple romance
‘Trying my best to bridge the distances that I created’
https://my.w.tt/kmslXyR9YW
Do you want a summary or?

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Title: A Golden Flame.
Genre: Action + Romance.
Link: https://my.w.tt/OYzjLck9GV

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It’s okay without the summary. Accepted. Please conplete payment

Accepted. Please complete payment.

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Okay! I’ll do itn

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Title: Riverside’s Perfect Murder
Genre: Mystery/thriller
Link: www.wattpad.com/myworks/187874233-riverside’s-perfect-murder
Anything Else?:Detective Rita Rawlins got the ten-sixty-five call “Armed Robbery in Progress.” Rita arrived at the Riverside Savings and Loan to find the security guard killed. It quickly became less about a robbery and more about a precision hit with zero clues. Except one of the bullets is laced with poison.
When Rita falls in love with the number one suspect, she struggles to keep the separation needed to solve the case and make an arrest.
Haunted by the death of Tony, her partner, Rita is suspended from the force. She has never been the kind of cop who leaves the job behind. She wants back in.
When her brother goes missing, Rita has no choice but to ask the suspected killer for help. Along the way, the two forge a fragile trust, but this new partnership is put to the test when the case takes an unexpected and dangerous turn.
Riverside’s Perfect Murder brings these two powerful people together in a riveting story that unfolds with furious momentum.
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I’m bad. I forgot “Beautiful Times.”

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payment was supossed to be done after I accepted, but you’re accepted :slight_smile: I’ll get right on it.

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Title: A Cool Breeze
Genre: Chick Lit
Link: https://my.w.tt/Q2gmpdiSiX
Anything Else?: I would just like you to know before hand that the character does make her decisions fast, and that is why it will seem as if a lot is happening.
Beautiful Times

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I enjoyed your story and added it to my reading list! Best of luck in your writing!

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Accepted. Please complete payment :slight_smile:

Payment completed!

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Title: The Madness of Doctor Galaggio
Genre: Fantasy
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/186829418-the-madness-of-doctor-galaggio
Anything Else?: I know people hate prologues, but I tried the story without one and it didn’t feel right. It’s short, though, I promise

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Accepted! :slight_smile: please complete payment

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I really enjoyed the first two chapters! Good luck in your writing! :slight_smile:

I’ll get started on your story soon!

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Thank you. And thank you for your comments. I appreciate them.:grinning:

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Just completed payment!

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Thank you. Will add you to the queue and get to your story as soon as possible.