Looking to share my honest thoughts on stories’ first chapters. I will share my reaction to lines, suggestions if you would like some, and maybe I’ll leave a joke as well, but don’t get your hopes up with the joke part.
Please post the link to your story and wait to be accepted before proceeding with the payment. This is to avoid encumbering from too many posts.
Payment: A thought on my short story, suggestion, or a point-out of something you liked or disliked.