100% Honest Feedback (accepting ALL genres) OPEN

feedback-offered

#1

Hi there! I am offering feedback on your stories! I will take all genres as long as the form is filled out correctly and the payment is completed upon acceptance.

I will read up to four chapters of your book, and I will leave my in-depth review at the end of what I read.

FORM:
Title:
Genre:
Blurb:
Chapters?(max. 4):
Link:

PAYMENT:
Read the 2 MOST RECENT poems in my book ‘liberosis’ https://www.wattpad.com/story/174265386-liberosis AND check out my story Letters To Noah https://www.wattpad.com/story/178187181-letters-to-noah

Please leave 1-2 comments on each of my books, I really take time with my feedback on your stories so it’s the least you could do in return :slight_smile: Also, what I’m asking you to read is REALLY short stuff.


#2

bump


#3

Greetings. I’ll be just leaving my profile page as I have quite a lot of stuff there already. Just choose yourself whatever seems most suitable.

Title: Profile page
Genre: I mostly write gothic / psychological horror infused with gloom & melancholia. It varies from sci-fi to mystery / conversational as well, though.
Blurb: Story-specific.
Chapters: Most range from 1 to 3.
Link: Already in the title.

Thank you.


#4

Accepted, please just complete the payment and I’ll add your story to my reading list.


#5

Of course. I’m no expert in poetry, but can leave honest comments.


#6

I’ll start as soon as all of the payment is done :slight_smile: :slight_smile:


#7

So, since the texts were quite short, there wasn’t that much to comment on. Left some thoughts anyway.


#8

TITLE: HER EYES
Lola Campbell has always been in the “in” crowd, but has never been at the top of the tier. Her main priority has always been focusing on her grades so she could get into a great college. Her mother was a producer for a music label and her father was a college instructor, so they were never really home. She ended up spending most of her time with her 4 best friends, Dominic, Anne, Antonio and Hailey.

As they walked into the school on the first day of their senior year Lola felt a slight tingle in her stomach, it kinda felt like butterflies. She had no idea why she’d be having this feeling on the first day, before she had really seen anybody other than her friends.

She had just broke up with her long time boyfriend Nick over the summer because she didn’t feel the spark anymore and on top of that he was pretty eager to make it to home base but the thought of it always made her feel unconformable.

As her crew headed to homeroom someone tapped on her shoulder. She turned around instantly captivated by those light blue eyes. She jumped a little after hearing hello in the back of her head, realizing that she’d completely zoned out her cheeks started to flush…
THIS IS My FIRST TIME


#9

please provide the link, once that is done… accepted. & complete all parts of the payment :slight_smile:


#10

Title : WAITINGFORYOU
Genre: short story/poetry/non-fiction/romance/drama
Blurb:
A short story on desperation of love written in a poetic form, where a young girl falls for a elder boy who changes her to be something she never wanted to be.

Based on true events.

Chapters :
So there’s actually 21 poems in the book, all of which are quite short. You can read as much as you want :blush:

Link https://www.wattpad.com/story/175361792-w-a-i-t-i-n-g-f-o-r-y-o-u

Thank you.


#11

accepted! i love poetry :slight_smile: just complete all parts of the payment and I’ll begin


#12

Great okay…:blush:


#13

Title: The Disease Called Men
Genre: Teen Fiction/Young Adult
Blurb: Who needs boys? Certainly not Aldenbury Girls Grammar School!

Just when everything began to finally fall into place, it falls apart - at least, for student council president Cerise. Cerise will do everything in her power to prevent Aldenbury from becoming co-ed. That includes bribery, coercion and maybe even the use of blackmail (which she may or may not have orchestrated the events herself). Along with her loyal, albeit reluctant group of friends, she has one goal in her mind:

Eliminate this disease called men.
Chapters: 4
Link: click here to read

Thanks for your time :relaxed:


#14

accepted! please complete all parts of the payment


#15

Done. :blush:


#16

Title: Leather Feather
User: RashidPrime
Genre: Science Fiction
Intro: What happens when a young bat falls in the middle of an intergalactic war between birds and rodents? Not even Pat himself can determine such fate. Good and evil. Bucks and Beaks. Fur and Feather? Those are the symbols of a conflict that spanned our eternal universe. But only one faction will prevail…

Hello! I’m new around here :see_no_evil: Please give this story a read you won’t regret it! It is just the first chapter so far… I’d like everyone to join my little corner and read my stories, see my comics ,and also see my illustrations that I post in my chapters.:heart:
I’d truly appreciate it :smile: :smile:
Link 1: https://www.wattpad.com/story/177458562
Link 2: https://my.w.tt/tECPDjwC9T

Note: can’t seem to upload the cover sorry


#17

Title: Changing Tides
Genre: Romance
Chapters?(max. 4): 4
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/177997271-changing-tides


#18

accepted, please complete all of the payment


#19

accepted, please do payment


#20

done and thank you :heart: