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#21

Title: Inseparable!
Genre: Romance
Blurb: Title: Inseparable!
Genre: Romance
Blurb: Karly is in a deep depression after she is bullied by Olivia, Madison, and Chloe. When she falls for Olivia’s older brother things go awry. She doesn’t know if she can trust Bowman and she can’t get over the fact that Olivia is a never-ending bitch!
Chapters? (max 4) All 3 chapters, please
Link: Will not let me put link!


#22

Bumpp


#23

BUMP

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#24

Guys give me something to do!


#25

Bump


#26

Title: Lemonade
Genre: teen fiction.
Chapters:1,4,5 and seven.
I would like to make a request; it will be really nice of You if you could pm me the feedback.
Link:https://my.w.tt/LbogWToufU
Gratitude


#27

Accepted, please complete payment


#28

Title: Dragon Son’s Apprentice
Genre: Historical Fiction
Blurb: Aksana is a royal guard in the Moldova court who spends most of her time enjoying the freedom of her families position as trusted and highly paid. During a surprise attack on Moldova, Aksana sacrifices herself as a prisoner of war in place of the Kings son. Over her stay at a Turkish national prison, she befriends a guard Emery, as the two of them grow closer Aksana spends her time fighting for her life and negotiating the perilous courts of her life long enemy.
Chapters: 4
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/24798303-dragon-son’s-apprentice

Thank you for considering me!! :grin:


#30

accepted, please complete all of payment


#31

yes, I already accepted you, you just need to complete all parts of the payment


#32

Done.
And pardon. My network sucks that is the reason for that spam.


#33

Completed-I love your writing style! Thank you so much!


#34

bump


#35

Bump


#36

Title: Judge’s Vanquish
Genre: Romance
Blurb: Vanessa Trent is a Fallow - a woman past the age of 21 who is unwed and with no children. Where many see it as a curse, Vanessa sees it as freedom. She employs this freedom to make a decision that will forever change her life. In order to support her father and siblings that are drowning in debt, she sells herself as a dancer to the court of Ryne. It is there that she meets the reserved Judge Troy Collins, and a forbidden passion spurs between the two. He challenges everything that she ever was, and everything she wants to be.
Chapters: 4

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/163900877-judge's-vanquish

How many of your chapters do I need to read and comment on? (2 comments for the poem and then 15 for the other story?) They are short, but that’s a lot of chapters to comment on, especially since only 4 of my chapters will receive comments.


#37

Accepted, you don’t have to do all 15. If you enjoy it, read as much as you want though


#38

Title Death: Realm of me, or is it just longings for You
Genre: Fantasy
Blurb: The adventure of a rookie Necromancer and her first contracted human soul.
Chapters: 1
Link https://www.wattpad.com/story/178329313-death-realm-of-me-or-is-it-just-longings-for-you


#39

accepted, complete payment


#40

I left a comment each they just didn’t resonate with me


#41

Did my comment not get sent? Let me know please because my touchis buggy