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#61

Reviews Done

  • crystallise - Of Solar and Dark

  • SentryCod - The Last Sophian

Currently Reviewing
SlightlyBlack - Challenge Accepted

Accepted and Now In Wait List

  1. Spruce_Goose - The Factory Girl
  2. NoLazyShadow - Fragmented Echoes
  3. GhostsInsideOfMyBed - Zeitgeist
  4. CatharsisKingdom - Airborn
  5. TockAC - Handwritten Poems
  6. LuliWrites - A Celestial Requiem
  7. MGCJoan - Leopard: The Unforgiving
  8. eclipsetales - Faerie | Percy Weasley
  9. bubblenikki - When I Sleep… I Dream of Mars
  10. ValerieJackson2003 - Dragon Rider in The Moder World
  11. Crysta_Levere - Vitality
  12. AliceHausling - The Romancing Tuesday Dennings
  13. @AnneMcKae - Haunted Rayne
  14. @AugustineReverie - Silver Glass
  15. @AuthorSho - Stuck Between the Rivals
  16. @Iori_kei - Fly High

_This Bitch’s Review thread is temporarily not accepting any more request for catching up. You can leave a request but you’ll have to wait in line for at least three above on the wait list is gone. Thank you for understanding! :slight_smile: _


#62

Hahaha. Give me all you’ve got. Thanks for accepting!


#63

Reviews Done

  • crystallise - Of Solar and Dark
  • SentryCod - The Last Sophian
  • SlightlyBlack - Challenge Accepted

Currently Reviewing
Spruce_Goose - The Factory Girl

Accepted and Now In Wait List

  1. NoLazyShadow - Fragmented Echoes
  2. GhostsInsideOfMyBed - Zeitgeist
  3. CatharsisKingdom - Airborn
  4. TockAC - Handwritten Poems
  5. LuliWrites - A Celestial Requiem
  6. MGCJoan - Leopard: The Unforgiving
  7. eclipsetales - Faerie | Percy Weasley
  8. bubblenikki - When I Sleep… I Dream of Mars
  9. ValerieJackson2003 - Dragon Rider in The Moder World
  10. Crysta_Levere - Vitality
  11. AliceHausling - The Romancing Tuesday Dennings
  12. AnneMcKae - Haunted Rayne
  13. AugustineReverie - Silver Glass
  14. AuthorSho - Stuck Between the Rivals
  15. Iori_kei - Fly High

Thank you for your patience and taking on this Bitch’s Review xD


#64

Hi! So I actually have my story on wattpad, but the more edited version is on docs. I’m okay with doing the payment, but do you mind doing the critique on a docs? It’s public, so you only need the link to access :slight_smile:


#65

Final Review of The Factory Girl by: @Spruce_Goose
Read until Chapter 3

Well… This is hard for me to review because I sincerely do not have faults for it. I honestly don’t know why do you want me to review your work when you obviously already know what you’re doing. While me on the other hand… I need help.
Only my biased opinion, I would change things because of my personal preference. But looking at it in an objective way, it’s kind of perfect the way it is.

The way you described everything is simple and easy to imagine in your head. The premised of the story is amazingly unique and rings true today with all the child labor and such. The emotional connection I have with the girls is already starting to deepen despite only reading three chapters and I am happy to say I am definitely going to read everything in the near future once you have completed it. (I’m a binge reader, commentator and voter so feel the spam of love in someday.) I would recommend this to anyone has the free time to read!

Rating: 4.8/5 (Just because nothing is perfect and everything can still be improved.)
Sidenote… I already added it to my I Am Waiting Bitches Reading list. So please complete it faster. I’m an impatient person xD


#66

Aww, thank you so much! I’m so glad you enjoyed what you read!

I’m working on it xD


#67

Reviews Done

  • crystallise - Of Solar and Dark
  • SentryCod - The Last Sophian
  • SlightlyBlack - Challenge Accepted
  • Spruce_Goose - The Factory Girl

Currently Reviewing
NoLazyShadow - Fragmented Echoes

Accepted and Now In Wait List

  1. GhostsInsideOfMyBed - Zeitgeist
  2. CatharsisKingdom - Airborn
  3. TockAC - Handwritten Poems
  4. LuliWrites - A Celestial Requiem
  5. MGCJoan - Leopard: The Unforgiving
  6. eclipsetales - Faerie | Percy Weasley
  7. bubblenikki - When I Sleep… I Dream of Mars
  8. ValerieJackson2003 - Dragon Rider in The Moder World
  9. Crysta_Levere - Vitality
  10. AliceHausling - The Romancing Tuesday Dennings
  11. AnneMcKae - Haunted Rayne
  12. AugustineReverie - Silver Glass
  13. AuthorSho - Stuck Between the Rivals
  14. Iori_kei - Fly High

If you haven’t noticed I recently learned this html stuff off the internet hence the colorful new list and bigger fonts. It’s kind of cool. Please appreciate me. I need validation for this. xD


#68

Good. I need to know my baby is okay xD


#69

Haha xD I just updated Chapter Ten and have made a head-start on Chapter Eleven so with any luck I can get a weekly update going… (Maybe)


#70

Noooo. I’m already in chapter 5. You’re saying I have to wait a few months before you finish it??? You demon!!! T_T
I’m only kidding please take your time. I prefer quality over quantity every time.


#71

I’ve only been writing it for 6 months xD I’m trying to get a head-start on some chapters because of uni work :smiley:


#72

Amazing! You didn’t write a draft too??


#73

I’m uploading as I go, a terrible idea for people who like consistent updates xD


#74

I can relate so much to you it hurts. That’s why I’m trying to write as much as I can while I don’t have job yet. Cuz I know for sure I wouldn’t get a chance to write when that shit starts.


#75

I’m juggling writing and Uni work which is why it’s hard to have consistent updates. Oh well xD


#76

Can i still request?


#77

It’s okay. I’m just going to ignore you every time you update just cuz it might be a cliffhanger. I love your work but I hate cliffhangers more. xD


#78

Accepted! Please link it to me here or if you prefer, just PM me the link.


#79

For sure, dear. :slight_smile:


#80

I’m a big lover of using cliffhangers xD I can’t help myself