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#1108

I’m sure it’ll be fine!

@ThingsUCantImagine Good luck with it!


#1109

Oh that sounds Awesome! I love those kinds of books. What is it called? I will add it to my list and read it :slightly_smiling_face:


#1110

HEY, SUP BRO


#1111

Long time no see


#1112

Lol hey :slightly_smiling_face: yea I have been busy the last couple of days. Been writing, doing a little reading, and out and about with the husband :slightly_smiling_face: what you been up to?


#1113

Getting help for my book…


#1114

Oh that’s great! Is it going Well? If need any advice can always message me on my profile. I’ll be glad to help if I can. :slightly_smiling_face:


#1115

Does this paragraph look good?

I step out of class when the bell rings and start toward my locker to get my things for history. As I walk, my mind wanders to Vylad, Allen, and somethings of my past. All of the sudden, screaming and pounding feet echo throughout the hall. I recognize the screaming as Allen and I quickly go to my locker, open it, throw my stuff inside, and close it, all the while thinking, " Please don’t hurt him! " My brain tells me to calm down and come up with a plan, but I respond with, " I’ll think on the way. " I go off running as someone in the hall yells, “HE’S HOLDING A KNIFE CHASING THAT KID!” Panic swells in my chest as I think, " I don’t want anyone to be murdered! " Sirens can be heard and increase in volume the closer they come, which only makes my fear grow. I slow to a jog with my brain whirring. " This guy has a knife, how am I supposed to fight him off without letting him cut me? I don’t want anyone to see my true identity, " I think. Without knowing, I stop moving and get lost deep in my thoughts. A plan forms in my mind, but I’d have to calculate it PERFECTLY. " I could slam into the attacker and knock them on the ground, but I’d have to get up immediately. Then what? Drag Allen to the girls’ bathroom? All of the other students will have already evacuated, " I let my thoughts venture. A scream snaps me out of them, and I just go with the only plan I formatted. The screams sounds like it’s life-or-death, and then a locker bangs, echoing. " Allen is trapped! No one is going to take over my rein of this school! " I rage and run to where the sound had rung out. When I get there, my heart stops, and I freeze, unable to move at what is happening.


#1116

It’s going wonderfully. Well, I got to go, sorry


#1117

It sounds good. Is this all one paragraph?


#1118

Oh ok well talk later I guess :slightly_smiling_face:


#1119

I see you already added it to your list. Thanks :slight_smile: I hope that you enjoy it!


#1120

Yes I found it :slightly_smiling_face: sounds really good. Can’t wait to read it.


#1121

Knife wielding kid in hot pursuit.


#1122

Hi everyone :slight_smile:


#1123

Hi guys, what do you think is easier to write: first or third person?

Thanks,

https://evolnovel.wordpress.com/


#1124

I think third person is easier. It allows me a broader canvas to paint on.
However, I think first-person allows for a sense of more emotional depth.
It doesn’t get any more personal than being inside of someone’s head.

Each one brings easier aspects, to sum it all up.


#1125

Thanks for your message,

Do you think it is weird if I am mixing both in the same volume? Let’s say that there is a logical switch.


#1126

For sure, overcoming fear is one of the greatest achievements. Still, when it comes to writing, for me, it is more like filling my time with something interesting.


#1127

This is the first chapter of my story “The Wilde Family”. Please, tell me, what do you think of it? ^^
https://www.wattpad.com/695333004-the-wilde-family-when-dreams-come-true