♡ Alice's Friendly Critiques ♡ {closed}



Accepted! At the moment I’m only committing to one chapter, would you like it to be the first one? If I have time I’ll continue on but because of my disability there are certain times that I do less. Just wanna be sure on that.

I’ll be able to start on this in the next couple days! :smiley:


Do as you want! Chapter 1 is just fine for now


Title: Handwritten Poems
Genre: Poetry
Blurb: Go on a poetic journey with Lexi where she learns how to love herself in this twisted world that she’s trapped in.
Which chapter: Chapter 1
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/164997855-handwritten-poems
How would I like my feedback: inline comments on WP
Complete payment: Yes


Accepted! :slight_smile:


Are you still accepting or are you closed because there’s three already?


I’ll accept you and close after this :slight_smile: but I might take a bit longer to get to you, however I’ll PM if there’s gonna be any long delays. You can leave the form info and I’ll add you to the list!


Title: Despondent

Genre: Romance/Teen fiction/Prose

Blurb: He didn’t do relationships, and she’s never been out of her gilded cage.

Which chapter: We might have to discuss this because the chapters are really short since the whole story is told in short prose excerpts.

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/168907190-despondent

How would you like your feedback: Google Docs, inline comments here on WP, or something else?: I don’t really have a preference. I think comments would be easiest but if have something else in mind I’m open to that too.

Do you agree to complete payment promptly?: Yes I do

Thank you and take your time, I’m in no rush.


I’ve caught up mostly now, so you are 2nd in line to be critiqued. :smiley:


Thank you!