👽 Alien Critiques 👽 (OPEN)

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#121

Your critique is done! I had a good time reading it and I think you’re doing really well. Keep up the wonderful work!


#122

https://www.wattpad.com/story/151971488-idle-thoughts
Thank you :smile:


#123

Pleas ecomplete payment and I’ll add you to the queue


#124

done


#125

Thank you so much!


#126

I finished your critique- not that there was much for me to do! You’ve got a great story on your hands and I’m excited to see where it goes.


#127

Your critique is finished!


#128

Thank you so much once again!! I appreciate it a lot! :heart::heart:


#129

Critique done! You had a wonderful poem and it was pleasure for me to read!


#130

Thank you :smile:


#131

title: Enlighten Me
genre(s): Poetry
brief summary: Just a bunch of poems that are reflections on society and myself. Some are also takes on mythology in a poetic format.
number of chapters you want me to read: 7-8 chapters would be nice but if you don’t have time just 3-4!
do you want numerous in-line comments or one giant critique in the comment section?: either
anything you want me to focus on (spelling, grammar, character development, etc.)?: just the overall flow and language used in my poetry
password: Scully


#132

I thought this was an alien species critique center for a hot second and I was like, Hell yeah, critique my many alien species!

but it’s not, it’s not. It’s a cool thread though, X Files is… I’ve never watched X Files, but it sounds like a cool show.


#133

Accepted! I will do the 7-8 chapters. Please complete payment and I will add you to the queue.


#134

Hi, I don’t know if this is still open, but I would really appreciate some critique. Thank you beforehand <3

Title: Fool me once
Genre(s): Fanfiction, Action, Romance
Brief summary: She had one mission; getting close to Kim Taehyung, the son of one of the most important diplomats in the government of the country for information and blackmail purposes.But what happens when she discovers that things don’t always go according to the plan and that there’s more to this than meets the eye?
Number of chapters you want me to read: 6
Do you want numerous in-line comments or one giant critique in the comment section?:
anything you want me to focus on (spelling, grammar, character development, etc.)?: Whatever you feel like :smile:
Password: Scully

I will now proceed to complete the payment ^^


#135

Payment done! Your story is really good so far, keep it up <3


#136

Accepted! I will add you to the queue


#137

payment done!


#138

bump


#139

Title: A World Untold
Username: mystiqueshadow378
Service requested: Critique
Chapters: 3 so far
Genre: Romantic-Fantasy
Summary: An eighteen-year-old girl transmigrated in a different body and in a different world. Now she was stuck in a royal battlefield of love and war.
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/174923962-a-world-untold

Thank you!


#140

Hi could i also ask if you can skip over the intro? It’s really just a beginning poem so i don’t think feedback is necessary on that one. Thanks!