Hello my lovelies! I’m searching for a beta reader for my recently completed story, The Serum. Any critique you can give me would be THOROUGHLY appreciated. Here’s the info:
TITLE: The Serum
GENRE: Short Story/Adventure/Thriller
BLURB: It’s the year 2250. Humanity is facing the largest threat in all of history. Ever since it first arrived in 2020, the coronavirus has mutated and developed resistance to the antibodies. Every person now lives in fear of the mutated beings, Creepers, that come alive at night, devouring anything with a beating heart.
Lizzy is no stranger to the affects of the virus. Her father and the love of her life were both taken from her and turned into the deranged monsters that lurk outside the dome. But when the president announces that they have found a serum that could repel the infection, Lizzy knows better than to hope. She wants nothing to do with the virus.
But when she’s drafted as one of the four to go and receive the serum, Lizzy has no choice but to accept. Going past the dome, walking thousands of miles through Creeper-infested ruins, then bringing back a serum that may not even work? It’s a death sentence.
But what other choice does she have?
thanks a bunch,