Hello fellow Wattpadders! I am super excited to be finished with my first full length novel, and now I am looking for a few Beta Readers to let me know what works about the story and what doesn’t! Below I will list out what I’m looking for and what payment I’m offering, but first, here’s the story and what it’s about:
Amber Blake hates Carter Hayes - at least, that’s what she tells herself.
She has since the day he walked out of her life after a falling out with her best friend, Mark. Close since childhood, Mark urges her to forget about the friend they once had, but when a confrontation brings the trio’s years-long tension to a head, the aftermath has Amber wishing she could forget her life completely.
As they always say, careful what you wish for.
Next thing Amber knows, she’s waking up in an unfamiliar bed, in an unknown city, staring at a stranger in the mirror. She’s aged ten years overnight, and even crazier, she’s married - to Carter Hayes.
Haunted by memories of the boy she knew, Amber struggles to see him for the man he is now. But when strange visions suggest a way to fix tragic mistakes from their past, and with Mark nowhere to be found, she’ll need to trust Carter more than ever.
Someone’s life depends on it.
What I’m looking for:
-Story/plot development: How much does the story engage you? Are you invested in the characters and what happens? Are there any major plot holes or things that don’t make sense?
-Character Devlopment: and overall, how do you feel about the characters? Are you invested in what happens to the MC? I’d also love any comments on favorite characters as well!
-Overall Enjoyment: most importantly, do you like the story? Is its structure engaging? I would love any and all reaction comments. The more I know about how people feel when reading, the better I can edit.
I am expecting you as a Beta Reader to finish the book in its entirety. If you cannot commit to reading the whole book, please do not respond.
What I am NOT looking for:
-spelling and grammar edits
-nitpicky comments on sentence structure UNLESS the sentence is confusing and makes it hard to understand the story
I am offering two forms of payment:
- I will permanently follow your account and add up to three books to a public reading list
- I will read up to ten chapters of your book and give detailed feedback. Bonus, if I really enjoy your book, I will add it to my personal library and will continue reading on! You might just gain a new reader out of this
If you have any questions, just let me know! Hoping to gain some great Beta Readers from this and possibly even friends!