Hi, I urgently need some beta readers and would give nice payments of your choice (excluding beta reading in return)
Title: Thorn Rose - An Ardent Love Affair
Genre and sub-genres: Mystery/Thriller and Romance
Description: When the love of her life leaves her for her former best friend, Marie is left devastated by the betrayal and chooses vengeance over forgiveness. She gets help from her uncle Albus Eli Quiss to get her married.
Albus, a name known by many for the ladies heartthrob he is. He is one of the most envied men in the trading industry because of his position that every other business person wishes to claim.
This man has everything he needs, but he also has a secret.
For years, he has a hidden motive that the media couldn’t possibly get their hands on.
What would happen when his past returns barging back into his life amidst the wedding preparations?
A past that had this rich, powerful man restless for years, one to know about his missing lady love.
I just need an honest opinion on the flow of the story and on character development.