Beta Readers Needed For Fantasy/ Teen Fiction Romance Book

I require Beta Readers for the story elucidated below:

Title: Fated
Genre: Romance
Sub-genre: Teen Fiction, Fantasy
Description:

“So you’re saying you just woke up and no one remembers you and all your stuff is gone and I’m the only one who can remember you?” he asks, humour and annoyance oddly complimenting each other in his tone.

“I’m afraid so.” I deadpan.

“You think I’m just gonna believe you?” he whispers, all humour leaves his eyes.

“I know you do.” I admit.


Juliet Hastings and Axel Reed have known each other for what seems like forever. They’ve hated each other since they were 8.

But what happens when Juliet wakes up one day to find a poster of herself announcing she’s missing and not a single soul can remember her? When everything is snatched away from her, her only hope is Axel and together they embark on an adventure of hope and love.

Between the literal heaven and hell, their single tether of sanity is each other.

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/171959056-fated

If you’re interested, my Wattpad account is KrazilySane, please feel free to contact me there.

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Interesting.
Sounds fun.

Hey! I went to take a quick look on your book, and though I can offer no real critiques yet, because I haven’t read it, I want to tell you that with dialogue you should put a comma instead of a period at the end of the sentence if you put ‘he said’ ‘she whispered’ etc, behind it. So instead of:

“I know you do.” I admit.

Do:

“I know you do,” I admit.

You don’t have to do this if you start with a different sentence after it, so if it would be:

“I know you did.” I look at his face, it shows no emotion.

Good luck!

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Thank you so much, I’ll be sure to correct it

Thank you so much, please do check it out if you’re interested

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i already added your book to my list.
fyi why did you change the cover??? this cover you have here is amazing :frowning:

I’ll read this! I’m a bit of a grammar freak lol so should I be critiquing everything or some kind of particular aspect?

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