Title: Luke Tennebris and the Emerald Amulet
Genre: Fantasy (new adult as the target audience is late teens through mid-twenties)
Description: Luke Tennebris, once the right-hand man of the villainous Firelord, now seeks to repair the amulet that helps him control his powers and to find a way to defeat his former mentor. Told through the perspectives of six main characters, this story blends humor, action, and strong thematic elements to tell a tale of religion, redemption, and responsibility. It is rated mature for rough language, graphic violence, some mild adult humor, and nonsexual nudity.
Important Information: The word count on the story currently stands at 102,403 words. I understand this is a huge ask and a monumental task. I am willing to read and critique something of equal or greater length or multiple smaller stories. In general, I’m pretty flexible in terms of what payments or services I can render in return for helping me improve my story.
Goal: I want to try to publish my story traditionally, as in find an agent and have a professional publishing company print my book as opposed to me simply self-publishing for a smaller market. I want this to be as good as possible, basically, so anything you take issue with, no matter how small or large, will be valuable to me. I’m not looking for a pat on the back and won’t be offended by harsh criticism.