Any comments/suggestions on the following blurb? It’s not for a query. This is the blurb that is submitted to Amazon with the cover and novel. The name of the novel is “High School Massacre.” Thanks.
Lincoln Steele, the ex-Special Ops Army Ranger turned Private Investigator, receives a call from Elena Bargas, an ex-girlfriend who vanished from his life when she walked out on him years earlier. There was a horrific high school shooting in her town and everything points to her son being the mass murderer. She begs Steele to prove that it wasn’t her son.
Steele goes to the small Arizona town near the Mexican border. Waiting for him on both sides of the border is corrupt law enforcement, drug trafficking, sex slavery, extortion, and murder.
In this second novel of the successful Lincoln Steele series, Steele does what he does best — get to the truth and make the guilty pay.