Book Critiques (All Genres Accepted) (One Spot Open)

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#1

Hi, I’m Shay, and I’m offering critiques. All you have to do is post the link to your book and write the password your favorite Disney Movie or Shakespearean play as well as your genre and maturity rating (with explanation). In payment, I would love your feedback on my book Wing Girl For Charming.

Also note that I only take ten people at a time.

Thank you


#2

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#3

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/166826871-what-the-morning-brings-nanowrimo2018

Mulan

Genre: Fantasy/YA
Rating: PG-13 there are no mature themes but obviously it’s not intended for a little kid audience


#4

Accepted.


#5

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/165544204-great-queen-rat

Beauty and the Beast (Cartoon version)

Genre: General Fiction/ Adult Fiction
Rating: PG (no mature content, at least yet)

I only have a prologue and chapter up, but would appreciate a critique in terms of style, how I handle dialogue, show/tell, backstory so far, any notes to improve. Thank you!


#6

Accepted


#7

Would you like me to comment on your story? or you prefer a PM? Let me know @shakespearian1


#8

Comment on my story, please.


#9

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/134296782-sapphire-flame

The Little Mermaid

Genre: Werewolf
Rating: R (Strong language and a little gore)


#10

Accepted


#11

Hello Shay! I’d love to get your feedback!

link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/163764668-silver-glass-but-he's-going-to-die-soon

Macbeth and Henry V

genre: paranormal/teen
rating: currently PG-13


#12

Accepted


#13

payment complete!


#14

Hello, I hope you can check mine too…

But just want to inform you that english is not my mother tongue and I am just new here :blush:
But I am crazy I have a courage to share my work.

Title: Untame - my innocent seduction
By: @yanieboi
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/163187440-untamed-my-innocent-seduction-book-i


#15

Hello, I hope you can check mine too…

But just want to inform you that english is not my mother tongue and I am just new here :blush:
But I am crazy I have a courage to share my work.
ALSO, I am a bit mature in content, hope it will not bother you?

Title: Untame - my innocent seduction
Genre: Mature
By: @yanieboi
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/163187440-untamed-my-innocent-seduction-book-i


#16

Hey if you have some spare time please can you check mine.

Title: Can you see
Genre: Teen fiction
Maturity rating: pg 13 I would say
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/165831297
About: This story is about the life of Alison who hides a deep secret, she is the kind of person that hates showing her emotions. This story deals with a modern issue that I know many people can relate to. We get to see how the issue has affected Allison mentally, physically and what it does to her life.


#17

Accepted but next time, remember to include password


#18

Denied. Sorry. I will read mature but only for violence and language. Erotica however is not a genre I read. Again, sorry.


#19

https://www.wattpad.com/644897751-life-and-death-two-for-the-price-of-one

Password: Up


#20

Accepted