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#1

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REQUIREMENTS

NO an-fiction/creepy-pasta/anime, ALL OTHER GENRE ARE ALLOWED
MINIMUIM of two chapters have to be published
MUST be in english

RULES

i will review the first two chapters of your book for free; if you want me to continue critiquing the rest, you are required to complete either payment

if you request more than ten chapters, you are required to complete both payment

i can deny you if you requested only two chapters

PAYMENT

you will have to review the same additional amount of of chapters of my book as I have of yours (example: if i critique 6 of your chapters, you have to critique 4 of mine)

or

shout-out my book

my book: Strawberries & Champagne
my account: Nonfictionism-

FORMS

author:

book title:

genre:

link:

amount of chapters to critique:

payment completed (only for those who want two+ chapters critiqued): [yes ] / [no]

each chapter critique or overall chapters critique:

where do you want me to post the critiques (book or here):

RUBRIC (what you'll be judged on)

grammar [ /10]

character engagement [ /10]

book pacing [ /10]

structure [ /10]

reader engagement [ /10]

cover [ /10]

additional side comments:

EXTRA

graphics shop [open & free]
writing 101
punny puns [horrible puns for everyone]

please remove your request forms as soon as you receive a “review completed” comment from me


Two truths, one lie 🙃
#2

slots:
@Fallintsel

@draphy

CLOSED
note: if you missed round one, it’s okay - round two will open up soon

EDIT: I am so sorry but I had to cut some of you with 2 chapter requests because this is kinda over whelming!


#7

Babe !


#8

Hey! :sob: :heart:


#9

payment completed


#10

author: @eliyeda

book title: Loving Ivy’s Colorful Mind

genre: Teen Fic, Romance, Mental Health

link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/173419628-loving-ivy's-colorful-mind

amount of chapters to critique : prologue + eight chapters

did you complete payment (only for those who want two+ chapters critiqued): Not yet, but I will get to it, it would be 7 chapters of your book to review. :slight_smile:

each chapter critique or overall chapters critique: Each chapter critique
where do you want me to post the critiques (private message, book, here): book and private message, you decide.

THANK YOU!


#11

If you don’t mind, I’m going to use my own rubric for your book! ^^

Author: Fallintsel
Book Title: Cambion
Genre: High-fantasy, Adventure, Supernatural, Mystery, Drama, Comedy, Romance
Number of chapters to critique: As many as you can, and I’ll do the same if you want. Though, I think you can do one chapter(not parts, one chapter).

Will pay after some agreements.

Each chapter or overall book? Either way works fine, haha.

Could you send me the critique stuff via PM? That would be great! :cherry_blossom:


#12

Yeah, that’s completely fine!


#13

Alrighty! Thanks! :ok_hand:t2:


#14

Aww thank you lol! And yeah, I don’t want people reading freakin’ FULL LENGTH ESSAYS. If you’re asking people to read your stuff might as well make it enjoyable and short! (Can’t wait to read yours, by the way)


#15

Thank you!! (Took some time haha)


#16

payment done! awesome read. I really enjoyed it!


#17

Thank you!


#18

I would love if you could look at the first two chapters of Overshot. I’ve had to rework a lot in the beginning chapters because I changed up the first chapter so much. Hopefully it all makes sense.

author: Riprish

book title: Overshot

genre: Sci-fi/Military

link: https://www.wattpad.com/554134159-overshot-chapter-1

amount of chapters to critique : 2

each chapter critique or overall chapters critique: each chapter

where do you want me to post the critiques In the chapter


#19

I would love to have your feedback on my story, Earthenia. It has two chapters so far.

author: MystiqueShadow
book title: EARTHENIA
genre: Romantic-fantasy
link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/174923962-earthenia
It has two chapters so far.
Each chapter critique is what I preferred.
In the chapter

Rubric
*grammar, structure, additional side comments, character engagement and overall


#20

Hello! I’d love to have some feedback from you ^^!
author: draphy

book title: The World Changer

genre: Fantasy adventure.

link:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/174132370-the-world-changer

amount of chapters to critique : 3 (A short prologue precedes the three chapters).

payment completed (only for those who want two+ chapters critiqued): [yes ] / [no] Yes, I gave a shout-out. I will be happy to also do a critique if needed.

each chapter critique or overall chapters critique: Overall please.

where do you want me to post the critiques (private message, book, here): In the book.


#21


#22

I’m not offended at all and I definitely appreciate all the time you put into writing the review!

Could you be more specific on what you mean by structure?

Yeah, I agree my pace is getting slower. The next chapter ups the action but then goes back to being slow again. I just have a lot of background in order for the plot to make sense. It’s like game of thrones where the whole first season is explaining stuff lmao, so I will work harder to put in some more hooks

and yeahhhhhh I just really needed a cover so I threw something together. I know it’s bad, but no worries I have someone working on a better cover! It just won’t be ready until next week

I’m really glad you liked it overall! and you KNOW I’ll be on the lookout for your chapters!


#23

As in the formatting of your book (that doesn’t really help, does it?)


#24

If it helps, get rid of EVERYTHING that won’t help with the plot. I know at the moment it may seem like EVERYTHING is crucial, but that is not always the case.

Can’t wait to see it!

Aww you’re too sweet!!