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#1

Hi guys! I’m a freelance editor, and I want to start working on creative writing. So, I’ll critique your story! I’ll sugar coat it or tear it apart, it’s up to you. The payment? Just read as many chapters from one of my stories as you want me to critique on yours - i.e. if you read 5 chapters, that’s how many I’ll critique.

Just fill out this form!

Username:
Book Name:
What Book of Mine You Read:
What Chapter You Read To:
Soft and Hard Review:
Comment or PM Feedback:


#2

Wattfreak1010
Bow To The State (Just go on my profile since it doesn’t show up by search)
Ferly
Chapter 4
Hard Review
PM Feedback


#3

Alrighty! Can’t wait to check it out!


#4

Username: carikitty
Book Name: Torn
What Book of Mine You Read: Ferly
What Chapter You Read To: I’ll read Three chapters of yours. Please start with my Prologue and Two chapters
Soft and Hard Review: Soft
Comment or PM Feedback: Comment
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/12476354-torn-prologue


#5

Let me know when you’ve read mine and I’ll get started! Can’t wait!


#6

Username: colourthestars-
Book Name: Rich Kids and Zombies
What Book of Mine You Read: Table for Two
What Chapter You Read To: 5
Soft and Hard Review: Hard
Comment or PM Feedback: Comment


#7

Awesome! Can’t wait to read it!


#8

Just a little reminder for me~
Bow to the State: Hard, PM, 4
Torn: Soft, Comment, 3
Rich Kids and Zombies: Hard, Comment, 5


#9

I’ve read yours. Sorry if I’ve replied late or done something wrong. First time posting in a Book Review thread, :smile:


#10

Payment done :slight_smile:


#11

All good sweetie you’re fine! Absolutely no worries at all!


#12

Thank you sweetie I’ll get right on it!


#13

Username: BellMayas
Book Name: Siphon Break
What book of yours: Rich Kids and Zombies
What chapters: One to five
Soft and hard review: mmmm soft
Comment or PM: Comment
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/184175786-siphon-break

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#14

Username: For_Love_Of_Fantasy
Book Name: Silent Echoes
What Book of Mine You Read: Ferly
What Chapter You Read To: 6 (for me a prologue and 5 chapters)
Soft and Hard Review: uhm just the truth lol
Comment or PM Feedback: Comment


#15

Read yours! :slight_smile:


#16

Username: kyrrai
Book Name: Jericho
What Book of Mine You Read: Ferly
What Chapter You Read To: i’m going to do 5
Soft and Hard Review: either if you feel the need to do a hard one then sure
Comment or PM Feedback: comments are fine

My chapters are very short (>600 words) just a warning


#17

Hi RKaZ isn’t my book so if you could just read one of mine I’ll get started right away


#18

I’ve actually read yours! Excited to check it out again!


#19

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Username: Mclainemoran
Book Name: Simple Days
What Book of Mine You Read: Ferly
What Chapter You Read To: About to get started, will be reading 4 though.(I haven’t released my 4th chapter yet but it will be coming up soon.
Soft and Hard Review: Hard
Comment or PM Feedback: Comments, it always makes things easier

I will be starting yours today starting now. Whatever I don’t finish in the hour will be completed after 6 tonight.


#20

I’d love it if you’d give my little collection a try. It is but a piece of my heart! :wink:

Title: A Piece Of My Heart
Genre: Poetry
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/179894308-a-piece-of-my-heart-poetry-and-more

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Falling in love is a process. So is falling out of it.
This collection of mine has been written slowly over the years.
It contains not only poems, but little tidbits, snippets from my diary, musings, and philosophies of what love is and of how love is bittersweet; love is not all roses and rainbows that media makes it to be.
It explores the other side of love, one that is filled with heartbreak,hope and longing for something you’ll never have.
When the soul weeps, the heart speaks… :heart: And these words are the fruit of my heart’s blood.
I hope what I write touches your hearts, burrows in and stays for life.

My collection is 38 posts long, but many of them are super short! So, this part is negotiable. Just let me know how many you can take :grin:

Please let me know if you’re interested!