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#21

Payment complete on 6 chapters. :grin:


#22

Username: SpokenWhisper09
Book Name: Outrunning the Color Gray
Book read: The House on Alstroemeria
Chapter read to: All of them (I’ll read 'em till you’re done)
I would prefer something in between, when it comes to the review. Just honest and constructive.
Feedback: Already done.

Here’s mine. Should you read it, I hope you enjoy it.
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/183733754-outrunning-the-color-gray-a-trilogy-book-one

Description: Caleigh (Cal) has vague memories of death when a man named Artemius gives her the choice to become a guardian angel. A light-wielding being meant to protect and serve. In making this choice, she’s left with no memories of her past, save for one that she won’t recall until after her hundred years of training. Added to this, she runs the risk of dying as an angel and becoming one of the countless and isolated stars in the sky. Regardless, she agrees, and even without her memories, Cal is forced to realize that her soul remembers darkness well. As she and her partner, Allete, fight their way through training, they realize that the darkness residing in Cal may very well be her end, even before she gets to earth.


#23

Username: @emtheadvocate
Book name: Break My Heart
What Book I’ll Read of Yours: Table for Two
What Chapter I’ll Read To: Chapter 5 (Divergence)
Soft or Hard Review: Hard
Comment or PM: Comment please.

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/8112414-break-my-heart

I’ll message you again when I complete the payment. Will most likely be tomorrow.

Thank you!


#24

oh how many chapters have you read? i’ll change the amount of chapters to read if needed!


#25

No no it’s fine because I didnt critique them!


#26

It’s going to take me a little while to get to them all bc of work/school/sports but I will!


#27

Username: Mysterygirlwriting1
Book Name: Head to Head
What Book of Mine You Read: Ferly
What Chapter You Read To: I will be doing 4, my 4th chapter will be uploaded later today :slight_smile:
Soft and Hard Review: Either, I appreciate any feedback you can give :blush:
Comment or PM Feedback: Comments would be fine :slight_smile:

I will start reading yours later on today :blush:


#28

ok great!


#29

done with yours now!


#30

Username: aych
Book Name: Denying Fate
What Book of Mine You Read: Ferly
What Chapter: I just finished reading all of it! I would appreciate all of mine too-it’s only 11 chapters so far : )
Soft or Hard Review: Hard, please! Tear it apart, I’m all ears.
Comment or PM Feedback: Comment

Thank you so much!


#31

Just in case I missed anyone, if I haven’t added your book to my list of current critiques, just let me know!


#32

https://www.wattpad.com/story/182965135-the-colour-of-your-voice 1

THE COLOUR OF YOUR VOICE

What happens when a death row prisoner and a prostitute falls in love? A short story of mine, only around 10000 words! hope you like it!

Genre: Romance, tragedy with elements of mental illness


#33

Hi, I have completed payment, reading 5 chapters from Table for Two.


#34

Username: Isihasenberg
Book Name: The Kingdon of Peryton White
What Book of Mine You Read: Table for two
**What Chapter You Read To All 5


#35

isihasenberg
The Kingdom of peryton white
Table for two
all five chapters
Hard Review
PM Feedback


#36

Username: skitpaella
Book Name: Feminism for Dummies
What Book of Mine You Read: The House on Alstroemeria
What Chapter You Read To: Chapter 4
Soft and Hard Review: Hard
Comment or PM Feedback: Comment

This is very different from what you might be used to read, so please take your time


#37

username: kkjhunter8
book name: The Pineapple Fountain
read: Table for Two, chapter 1
hard review, pm please
link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/184649460-the-pineapple-fountain


#38

Payment completed! :slight_smile:


#39

I’ll beginning working on yours soon


#40

I havent forgot!I’ll begin working soon