Genre: Cross cultural romance/Thriller
Blurb: Passed down the family, the weight of centuries-old trust was placed upon Salma Rahman when she was only two. The little Sthooriy girl from Oochaath tribe, has now grown up into a smart, passionate, but a very stubborn young lady who lives a happy, though sheltered life. Having picked up an unexpected interest in bees, she has her eyes set on becoming an entomologist. Everything seems to work out, until an accident befalls her on her way to a camping trip, and her only companion in the desolate wild, Zayn Harris, strikes her like a bolt from blue.
He leads a dual life; she has her secrets to keep.
He’s scarred by his past; she’s too nonconforming to give him what he needs.
He’s not willing to give up; she doesn’t plan on giving in.
Holding on to the Code she has been raised to live by - a code that has been passed down the generations for over a millennium - she tries not to get lost.
While they stick to their disparate worlds of thought, bickering back and forth, a terrifying shadow prowls the forest in the dead of the night. To survive, Salma and Zayn must overlook their differences, or their attempts to strike a compromise might come too little, too late, too lost.
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