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#1

I N T R O D U C T I O N

Hello! I’ve been a BETA reader off and on for the last seven years, so I thought I’d offer my feedback services to undiscovered writers who may be looking to improve their craft. As mentioned above, I will read up to 5 chapters of your story. I will leave inline comments on my thoughts and any suggestions I have, which you can utilize if you like. If you prefer one lengthy comment per chapter, or for me to PM you, I can do that as well.

S P E C I A L T I E S

I am fairly proficient at catching grammar mistakes, plot holes, pacing, descriptors, etc.

O T H E R

I will pretty much read any genre; however, I probably won’t be any good at fanfiction if I have to know the fic source material to understand your work. I also probably won’t be helpful with poetry or anything of the sort as it’s just not my thing.

P A Y M E N T

This is basically a read-for-read. You read and comment on one chapter of mine, I’ll read and comment on one chapter of yours. If you do five of mine, I’ll do five of yours. You get it. Payment is not required until I have accepted you. I won’t start your feedback until you have completed payment.

I have three stories for you to choose from below. ALAYLM is New Adult Romance (I mark any mature scenes to be skipped over if that’s not your dice), Paragon is Science-Fantasy, and The Huntress is Historical Fiction piratess.

F O R M

Title:

Genre:

Link:

Number of Chapters: (how many are we reading of each others?)

Which of Mine Are You Reading?:

Feedback Preference: (inline, one overall comment per chapter, PM)

M I N E

#2

Q U E U E

#3

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Title: Where There Is Nothing

Genre: Magic Realism

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/131410559-where-there-is-nothing-act-i

Number of Chapters: 1

Which of Mine?: AS LONG AS YOU LOVE ME

Feedback: read-for-read.

#4

Accepted.

How did you want your feedback? As inline comments, full overall end of chapter comment, or through PM?

#5

end chapter comment is fine. Thanks.

#6

Title: Dragon Rider In The Modern World

Genre: Fantasy

Link: https://my.w.tt/OgSoutAc3U
Number of Chapters: 33(currently)

Which of Mine?: either huntress or paragon

Feedback: (inline, one overall comment per chapter, PM)in-line or overall.

#7

Title:

Genre:

Link:https://www.wattpad.com/706483222-black-rose-prologue

Number of Chapters: 2

Which of Mine?: 2

Feedback: ON CHAPTER

thanks so much

#8

Accepted

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#9

Accepted. I’ll get started on yours shortly since you already did!

#10

Awesome man its just a prologue and chapter 1 chapter one is long but you can take a break and come back to it. LOVED your story. It was the one with Zaria right? EPIC. I will read on I promise you. I do my best reading in the morning so I will certainly continue with Zaria’s journey. Im with chu sister FECK PERRY.

#11

Zari, yeah. And Perry is an ass, and he does get his own POV in next chapter so you start to hate him more. I’m off to yours now.

#12

Already started Paragon

#13

Do you want just one chapter read?

1 Like
#14

i would love for you to read the first part of my short story i just published.

Title: Jericho
Genre: Short-story
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/181439802-jericho
Number of chapters: 3
Which of mine are you reading? : Paragon
Feedback: overall comment

Thanks!

#15

I’m reading the next, but I’m in school, so I had to stop after the first, but I will read all of them

#16

I’m only offering to read 5 chapters right now so is that fine? I’ll critique five of yours for five of mine, or however many within that number you prefer.

1 Like
#17

Accepted.

#18

You have 6 in Paragon. I’ll read them all.

#19

Title: Torn

Genre: Vampire/Thriller/Slow-burn Romance (R15)

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/4277342-torn

Number of Chapters: First Five (excluding Prologue)

Which of Mine Are You Reading?: Paragon

Feedback: In line comments

#20

Accepted