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#21

Title: Wattpad Letters: A vintage twist into a modern love story

Genre: general fic, Contemporary Romance, humor

Link: https://my.w.tt/Hp2ApJNm4U

Number of Chapters: 5, but I’m willing to go all the way to your 12 parts if you are interested in doing the same :slight_smile:

Which of Mine Are You Reading?: ASYLM

Feedback Preference: inline or overall, I have no preference

#22

If you want to do 12 for 12, that’s fine. I’ve only got one other in queue before you so I’ll get to it sometime today.

 <a href=" [https://www.wattpad.com/687948538-wattpad-letters-a-vintage-twist-into-a-modern-love](https://www.wattpad.com/687948538-wattpad-letters-a-vintage-twist-into-a-modern-love)"><img src="https://i.imgur.com/7ixN0BJ.png">
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#23

Great! Then yes. Right now is 1am here hahaha, so I’ll be getting to it later today too.

#24

Title: Ivory Black

Genre: Teen Fiction

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/637525670-ivory-black-author-notes

Number of Chapters: 2

Which of Mine Are You Reading?: As Long As You Love Me

Feedback Preference: (inline, one overall comment per chapter, PM) inline

#25

can i actually request you do 2 chapters instead of just 1?

#26

Payment done

#27

@witchoria when you continue updating Paragon can the reads and feedback I will surely give count for more chapters of feedback?

#28

Sure, can you edit your post so that when I update it later I’ll have the info for it

#29

Accepted

#30

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#31

done with reading. i loved it!

#32

Accepted

#33

Title: His Eternal Muse
Genre: Teen Fiction
Link: https://my.w.tt/wrHYWeiM6U
Number of chapters: 5 (You can skip the author’s note and the cast list)
Which of mine are you reading?: As long as you’ll love me.
Feedback Preference: Inline

Thank youu so much for doing this! :slight_smile:

#34

Accepted. And no worries, I don’t count anything like cast lists and author notes as critiquing content :stuck_out_tongue:

#35

Title: The Scent of Roses

Genre: Historical Fiction

Link: I’m new to the community section of Wattpad but this is my only published story so it should be easy to find :blush:

Number of Chapters: 3 (I have just started rewriting/editing existing chapters so if there are a few more chapters added I hope you don’t mind reviewing them too)

Which of Mine Are You Reading?: The Huntress

Feedback Preference: (inline, one overall comment per chapter, PM) PM please

#36

Payment complete. I would like it if you could start at 3 and read until 8, instead of starting at the beginning. The first two chapters and the prologue have tons of comments already.

#37

I was too late. I appreciate your feedback, though. It was very thorough.

#38

I’ll read the next three in a bit, since there wasn’t anything really for me to critique in yours

#39

Ah, thanks

#40

Accepted

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