C.S Book Club (full)

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#62

Done.

(You know, this is actually really fun!)


#63

I agree


#64

Done


#65

Done.


#66

Done ^^


#67

I also agree, it’s fun to see others’ writing styles :smiley:


#68

This is kinda weird to me!


#69

how come?


#70

Idk, it’s normal to give the comments, but receiving them makes me a tad bit anxious. Don’t get me wrong, I don’t hate it, it just feels out of place because I’m not used to being the one receiving comments or votes, because I’m the one who usually gives them.


#71

I get what you mean, it might be less weird for you when we’re onto your next chapter and more familiar with each other. I know comments from people you don’t know is kinda nerve wracking.


#72

I think most of us feel this way. I’m a little terrified at the thought that I’ll be up sometime soon and I almost wish I’ll be skipped or forgotten or something. :joy:


#73

I scrolled through your prologue before accepting and your writing looks really good don’t worry!


#74

My ego is very grateful for your kind words!

(The rest of me can’t help but point out how it goes downhill after the prologue! :joy: )

Still, this club is a good opportunity to put ourselves out there while meeting fellow authors so I am looking forward to reading everyone and having me read as well. :blush:


#75

Done!


#76

Done!


#77

Done!


#78

Done!


#79

Since the prologue is very short I’m going to start off with chapter 1 of @ZoekieS book ‘The Sun’s Tears’ for the comments (the prologue only takes a minute to read so if you can check it out please do)
Also I realized some of us may have read the first chapter before, as a solution I’d say choose the next chapter you haven’t read.

Chapter link: https://www.wattpad.com/674934741-the-sun's-tears-part-1-chapter-1-aebbé-uncharted

@heiress-of-slytherin @Ivy279 @fruitcup8 @draphy @insouciantsoul @PaulaPespo @nicolettem64 @LuliWrites


#80

Dude, I feel the saaaamme way. I feel like pretty good about the first few chapters, and then it just goooeeesss… Could be my inner critic talking, but still


#81

done!