Cactus Critiques - Open


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aboutme

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Hi guys, My name is Brittani. I am a proud Navy Wife that spends my extra time writing and reading. I’m obsessed with all things ocean related and I love spending time with my friends and family. Reading and Writing has always been a hobby for me and I’ve been on this website for over 5 years enjoying these very hobbies.

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Here I will be offering Critiques. The amount and type might change depending on how much time I have and what I’m feeling, but I will always offer just critiques.

Currently, I am offering:

In-depth critiques on your first chapter

Or

Overall Critiques on the first three chapters of your book.

These critiques will be posted in this book for you and others to see. I may leave comments on your story if I see something but it’s not guaranteed.

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Now I’m sure all of you are wondering how you can get a critique from me. Well, that part is simple. Either post here, or post on my critique thread filling out my form and my form only. After that is complete I will take a look at the story and see if I’m interested in reading it or not. After I accept your request you will need to complete payment.

Payment: A permanent follow, and adding my novel High Class and Aqua Waters to a public reading list. That’s it. It’s super easy.

If you are not okay with this payment we can discuss alternatives privately.

Link to Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/152186285-cactus-critiques

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Name:

Username:

Story Title:

Link:

Critique Type:

Feel free to add your cover

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#2

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From Book


Name - Story - Type - Post - Status

Tana - Love me, A Siren - First Chapter - Here - Currently Crafting Critique

Lola - Limerence - Overall - Here - Currently Crafting Critique

Emily - Not In Love - Overall - Here - Not Started



From Thread


Name - Story - Type - Post - Status

Shadow - A World Untold - Overall - 87 - Currently Crafting Critique

Dani - The Elementalists - Overall - 92 - Not Started



Completed Waiting For Posting


Name - Story - Type - Post - Status - Post Date

Meri - Schrodinger’s Child - First - 27 - 03/27/2019

Hollie - the Tag Bearer - Overall - 36 - Critique Completed - 03/29/2019

JGrace - The Legend Of The Moonflower Princess - overall - 39 - Critique Completed - 03/29/2019


Maia - Ash and Cinder - First - 43 - Critique Completed - 04/01/2019

Niharika - Finders Keepers - Overall - 48 - Critique Completed - 04/01/2019

Alayna - The Portrait Of Evienne - Overall - Here - Critique Completed - 04/03/2019

Leah - Killer Instinct: Carrie Unleashed - Overall - Here - Critique Completed - 04/03/2019

Darius - Carrie: Blood Of Redemption - Overall - Here - Critique Completed - 04/05/2019

Leighyeann - Project Life - First - 51 - Critique Completed - 04/05/2019

Rashida - Ostentatious - Overall - 52 - Critique Completed - 04/08/2019

Asa & D.J. - Core Machina - Overall - 56 - Critique Completed - 04/08/2019

Madison - Sapphire Dream - Overall - 60 - Critique Completed - 04/10/2019

A.S. Alsayyah - Sliced: Iron Earth - Overall - 62 - Critique Completed - 04/10/2019

Sondi - Lead Me Astray - Overall - 73 - Critique Completed - 04/12/2019

Sondi - Into The Wild Dark - Overall - 73 - Critique Completed - 04/12/2019

Ashton - Somebody To You - overall - 77 - Critique Completed - 04/15/2019

R.L. Tiger - Bound - Overall - 78 - Critique Completed - 04/15/2019

Kate - Reborn - Overall - Here - Critique Completed - 04/17/2019

Abi - Colour Me Blue - Overall - Here - Critique Completed - 04/17/2019


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Open


#4

You may now post.


#5

hi i would love for you to look at the first part of a short story i just published! it’s super short but i would love to get feedback on it!

Name: Allie (not sure if this is what you’re asking)
Username: kyrrai
Story Title: Jericho
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/181439802-jericho
Critique type: first chapter critique


#6

Accepted, Please complete payment. <3

Yes, for style reasons I want to put peoples names in the queue instead of usernames. I think it looks better.


#7

payment is done


#8

You are missing the second half of it. Adding my novel High Class and my novel Aqua Waters to a public reading list <3


#9

oh oops sorry i just did it


#10

No worries. I got it. I will hopefully have this done for you tonight. <3


#11

Hi hi hi

Yeah could you Czech out my story Black Rose?

Name: Paddy Ptah
Username: @paddycarr
Story Title: Black Rose
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/706483222-black-rose-prologue
Critique: First two chapters ITS ALL I HAVE

Its sound of you appreciate it.


#12

Denied, sorry. Please feel free to undo payment. The story just doesn’t seem like it fits into my personal style of story. I wish you the best of luck. <3


#13

Hello :slight_smile:! I’d love to know what you think of my story!

Name: Sajee

Username: draphy

Story Title: The World Changer

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/174132370-the-world-changer

Critique Type: Overall for three chapters.


#14

Hello!

Name- Avantika

Username- @rosemill2017

Story Title- Ex- Future Queen of Salovia

Link- https://www.wattpad.com/story/181328844-ex-future-queen-of-salovia

Critique Type- First chapter in-depth critique.


#15

@draphy & @rosemill2017 - Both Accepted, please complete payment if you haven’t already. Payment is a permanent follow and adding my novel High Class and my novel Aqua Waters to a public reading list.


#16

Yay, will do the payments now :slight_smile:!


#17

Payment completed.
Thank you for accepting the request.


#18

Of course, thank you for requesting.


#19

**Name:**Valerie

Username: ModernWaterRider

Story Title: Dragon Rider In The Modern World

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/155615479

Critique Type: overall


#20

Accepted, please complete payment and thank you so much for requesting.