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#21

ok thank you


#22

Title: Is Magic a Superpower?
Chapters: 12 + prologue
Summary: : It has been five years since she was exiled to Earth. Her memories and magic sealed away, keeping her in the dark. But when her magic comes back, she can’t control and it may just hurt her.
Rating: not mature
Genre: Fantasy/ superhero
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/86646941-is-magic-a-superpower


#23

ok I’m going to read the first chapter of the stories and if I find them interesting or not i will either continue or tell you its not my style. I will edit the 1st chapter if that is what you are interested in. I will see if your story is in need of any editing should I say but I will only do the first chapter for right now.


#24

I look forward to hearing your feedback😀


#25

I have to say I just read the 1st chapter and I’m already hooked. Its very good, interesting and has just enough dialog and description of everything that’s going on. I think I’m going to love Hildegund. She is one feisty character. 10/10 would definitely read all the way through.

I didn’t see any grammar errors while reading. It flowed well and it was concise.


#26

Thank you, I really appreciate that!

I’m in the process of revising, so if you keep reading, I can’t promise that the next chapter will be quite as tight, but I’m working on it :grinning:


#27

yeah that happens sometimes. I’m still trying to revise mine. I’m not good at revising my own writing for some reason.


#28

Yes, I’m awful at catching my own mistakes! I’m so grateful for all the various comments and critiques I’ve received on Wattpad. And as I revise I’m continuing to seek feedback. Revision and editing seems to take more time than writing!


#29

yea


#30

Would appreciate your feedback.


#31

accepted please complete payment


#32

accepted


#33

Title: somebody to you
Chapters: 4 (not including the warning chapter)
Summary: ”i just want to be somebody to you.” (this is all I have written for it right now but it will be changed in the future)
Rating: not mature but includes some stuff people might be triggered by (there’s a warning chapter titled 00)
Genre: fanfiction, lgbt+
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/173025984-somebody-to-you-➸-bradley-simpson


#34

Hey, any chance you could check out the second part of my book? I just posted a revision. My goal was to reduce the info dumping and make it overall smoother. Did I succeed?

I’d be happy to read more of your work in return. Please let me know :smile:


#35

Title: Legacy of Dolyn vol 1
Chapters: 78 (complete)
Summary: All her magical bets are off. Now or never.

Cheery, party-loving Glen was born with unwanted powers. So when a motherly, bossy cat shows up with a training regime, Glen shows no interest whatsoever. After all, she doesn’t believe in the potential to become a sorceress. The young woman prefers living her life (simple as it is) without hard spells or crazy chants. The last thing Glen wants to do is fight the evil that’s ahead of her.

Unfortunately for Glen, she cannot refuse the offer. She needs to become a competent sorceress as soon as possible. Otherwise, the fate of the world will be severe if she refuses her destiny.

Thus she ends up with two options available. The first option is to accept the upcoming fate and destruction of the world. Or take the second option: to engage in her task and become a sorceress to save the world as a real heroine.
Rating: PG-13
Genre: YA urban fantasy
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/166923428-legacy-of-dolyn-vol-1


#36

Title: Heart Sound
Chapters: 3
Summary: Evie’s a disaster magnet, bad guys just seem to fall into her lap. So when she gets the job to take down one of the most notorious (and sexy) bounty hunters of the underworld she happily accepts. But what happens when the hunter becomes the hunted? When secrets are revealed Evie becomes the world’s most wanted and it’s a race to the death. Love, betrayal, and creatures from another world?!
Rating: M for language violence and some XXX in the future
Genre: Sci-Fi/ Fantasy/ Romance
Link:https://www.wattpad.com/664889022-heart-sound-authors-note

Please let me know if you have time <3

Lots of love

~Miss Foxx


#37

Well it is based off another story and it is that story in a nutshell so… I know you didn’t intend to be rude but for some reason i just take that as a plain insult. I have more than 3 paragraphs because that was just my first chapter, i will be updating more often. You are just being honest and I respect that. It is supposed to not make sense at all and give the reader no clue what is going on, and why they are reading this. It just annoys people more to rewrite than it does to continue the story. I try to make it longer but I struggle with writing. Everybody who is reading knows who Error is, because it is fanfiction. I need an editor because of my poor spelling so that is why i came here. Please reconsider.


#39

Title: Leather Feather
User: RashidPrime
Genre: Science Fiction
Intro: What happens when a young bat falls in the middle of an intergalactic war between birds and rodents? Not even Pat himself can determine such fate. Good and evil. Bucks and Beaks. Fur and Feather? Those are the symbols of a conflict that spanned our eternal universe. But only one faction will prevail…

Hello! I’m new around here too! :see_no_evil: Please give this story a read you won’t regret it! It is just the three chapters. so far… I’d like everyone to join my little corner and read my stories, see my comics ,and also see my illustrations that I post in my chapters. I post weekly. I’ll read your story too no probs
I’d truly appreciate it :smile:
Link 1: https://www.wattpad.com/story/177458562
Link 2: https://my.w.tt/tECPDjwC9T

Note: can’t seem to upload the cover sorry :heart:


#40

Title: Beginning of Secrets

Chapters: 14

Summary: Lucas Tathern, a book lover, never belonged anywhere. After the celebration of his seventeenth birthday, his best friend ends up in a hospital. Meanwhile, a new teacher has arrived and has taken an interest in Lucas, while a strange girl tells Lucas his family is not his own. Will Lucas discover where he belongs?

Rating: PG-13

Genre: Teen Fiction/ Fantasy

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/119803286-beginning-of-secrets


#41

Yes I wasn’t trying to be rude or insult you but I do stand by my word. My main problem with it was the fact that you couldn’t distinguish between you a/n and the story itself. You have a beginning a/n and then you have one at the beginning of the same chapter your story is on.