so i am writing this plot where this one psychopath needs revenge from american agencies and army cause in world war 1 he lost his whole family. even when he offered them his loyality and faith but they refused. so now he is behind on one of the agent’s daughter to get back his revenge. that girl have the key to america’s all secret co operations and intelligence. her dad was a agent and he was one of those responsible for his family’s death.
so is this fine ?
i also need suggestions cause i think i am not sure to put this plot in my novel but i want advises from you all if it is a that weird and do rate this from a scale of 1 to 10 how bad is this
thanks your help is really appreciated.