I’m Pari and it’s nice to meet ya!
There’s no point beating around the bush- first chapters are important. You think you have a nice story, but if the first chapter does not leave your reader hungry for an update, chances are they’ll forget your story in the vast sea of wattpad. That sucks, because you know your story has so much more potential than the reads it currently has.
So let’s work on that first chapter together, yeah?
I’ll be working on grammar, syntax, overall flow of the story, character development, and anything else that you want me to specifically look at. I’m really looking to expanding my wattpad library so if your story keeps me hooked, I’m surely going to keep it in my library
I would like to say I keep an open mind with all the stories that I’m working on, but I am absolutely rubbish with Sci-fi and poetry, so if your story falls in either of these genres, I’m sorry!
I would love to hear your views on the first chapter of my story, ‘Always and Forever’. It’s in it’s nascent stage so I want to polish it as much as I can before making the final draft. Here’s the link:
Let’s start our requests by saying hello first, before the rest of the form
Areas to be reviewed:
Link to story: