[Classic’s Critiques] - CLOSED


#41

Many thanks for detailed feedback. It’s going to be a lot of rewrites before I can get it perfect but you have given me some good ideas


#42

Thank you! I just finished the payment(:


#43

Story Title: Death In The Family
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/174789332-death-in-the-family
Genre: Psychological Thriller
Number of Chapters you’d like me to read: 3
How would you like your feedback given to you? At the end of the chapter
Payment Option Selected: 2-lined comment
Anything else? My story is the second in a series and has some squicky content (incest, murder, abusive relationships, drug use, disordered behavior), so I absolutely understand if you pass on it.


#44

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Title: SINFUL
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/169967192-sinful

Genre: Werewolves-Fantasy

Number of chapters: 2

Feedback: on the comment section of the story.

Payment: I’ll check out your story.

Summary:
//Hazel eyes open, searching for my own. Brown against hazel, mine and his. I could stay like this forever.

Mates are a curse for the ones like me.

From sin made, sinful will remain.

Whatever curse I have, I don’t care, I don’t even care about feeding, or breathing. All I care about is those hazel eyes, and the werewolf they belong to. He’s mine. //

Cleo is a death Witch. Merciless, powerful, greedy , passionate. A Huntress capable of getting any prey she desires.
Malik is a werewolf who gave into his wolf for far too long.
Both lost in their own wild nature.
But be aware that if one of them falls, so does the other, for the biggest of blessings is their curse.
The Huntress and the Beast are meant to be.
Let the Hunt begin.


#45

You’re very welcome! I have one more chapter to look over for you, as I’ve set a limit to 3 chapters per sitting. If you need anymore feedback in the future (maybe after your rewrites), just let me know.


#46

Hi there!

As you’ve asked me to critique 3 chapters, you’ll need to complete both options as stated here:

If you are not comfortable with completing both options you may drop the number of chapters I read down to 2. Then you’ll be able to select your payment option of choice.

Thanks for your interest!


#47

[ACCEPTED]

You may go ahead and complete the payment.

Thank you!


#48

okay np will do


#49

Story Title: Sea High
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/174276539-sea-high
Genre: Teen Fiction
Number of chapters you’d like me to read: 1
Which chapters would you like me to read? 1’st as it’s the only one up.
How would you like your feedback given to you? PM would be nice
Payment Option Selected: option one
Anything else? None. Thanks if you choose to accept


#50

[ACCEPTED]

You may go ahead and complete the payment.

Thank you!


#51

Hi, I would love some feedback on my story!
Story Title: The Legend of the Moonflower Princess
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/659085416-the-legend-of-the-moonflower-princess-where-the
Genre: Fantasy, High Fantasy, Epic Fantasy
Number of chapters you’d like me to read: 3 (you can continue on from the last chapter you reviewed)
Which chapters would you like me to read? I don’t remember the last chapter you reviewed, so just the next three after that
How would you like your feedback given to you? Any feedback is appreciated
Payment Option Selected: Option 2
Anything else? Nope!


#52

Story Title: Lost Without You
Link- https://www.wattpad.com/story/164696389-lost-without-you
Genre- Romance/Teen-Fiction
Number of chapters I’ll like you to read: 2 or 3
How would you like your feedback given to you?: Through direct-message
Payment option selected: Add a book to my public reading list and Follow
Anything else- no


#53

[ACCEPTED]

I will agree to reading 2 chapters for you. You may go ahead and complete the payment.

Thank you!


#54

[SORRY]

I’m going to have to refuse your request. I’m closing this thread for catch up.

Thanks for your understanding!


#55

No problem!


#56

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#57

Hello! I would love to know what you think of my story ^^.
Story Title: The World Changer
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/174132370-the-world-changer
Genre: Fantasy Adventure
Number of chapters you’d like me to read: 1 / 2 / 3
Which chapters would you like me to read? Chapters 3,4 and 5 (So wattpad parts 4,5 and 6) (I hope it won’t be too confusing, but I have a lot more feedback on my prologue and the first two chapters than on these).
How would you like your feedback given to you? Inline would be preferable.
Payment Option Selected: Both.
Anything else? I’d love a focus on the plot, characters and pacing.


#58

[ACCEPTED]

You may go ahead and complete the payment.

Thank you!


#59

Thank you ^^! I will try to complete the payment before tomorrow night ^^! (I have an exam tomorrow morning, and it’s night here DX).


#60

I think I’ve posted here before, but if it isn’t too much to ask, would you mind critiquing a few more chapters of my book please?

Story Title: The Legend of the Moonflower Princess
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/691606982-the-legend-of-the-moonflower-princess-where
Genre: Fantasy, Epic Fantasy, High Fantasy
Number of chapters you’d like me to read: 3
Which chapters would you like me to read? Um, I don’t remember the last chapter you critiqued :joy:
How would you like your feedback given to you? In-line or at the bottom of the chapter is fine
Payment Option Selected: Um, I think I did both already. I’d be happy to review another chapter.
Anything else? Nope!