[Classic’s Critiques] - CLOSED


#61

Story Title: The Disease Called Men
Link: click here to read
Genre: Teen Fiction/Young Adult
Number of chapters you’d like me to read: 3
Which chapters would you like me to read? Lesson 1-3
How would you like your feedback given to you? Chapter/inline
Payment Option Selected: Option one
Anything else? Thank you for your time :relaxed:


#62

Story Title: Letters To Noah
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/178187181-letters-to-noah
Genre: short story/teen fic
Number of chapters you’d like me to read: 3
Which chapters would you like me to read? prologue-chapter 2 (they’re really short!)
How would you like your feedback given to you? PM
Payment Option Selected: Option 2
Anything else? nope :slight_smile:


#63

[ACCEPTED]

I’ll figure out which chapter I read last. You can go ahead and critique the second chapter of Eleutheromaniac as payment.

Thank you!


#64

[SORRY]

Since you’re requesting I critique 3 chapters of your story, both payment options must be completed. Let me know if that’s okay and I’ll go ahead and accept your request.

Thank you!


#65

[SORRY]

Since you’re requesting I critique 3 chapters of your story, both payment options must be completed. Let me know if that’s okay and I’ll go ahead and accept your request.

Thank you!


#66

payment completed


#67

Oop! Sure, that’s okay. :blush:


#68

[ACCEPTED]

Perfect, you may go ahead and complete the payments. I will add you to the queue.

Thank you!


#69

Story Title: Fallen
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/176647925-fallen
Genre: Dark Fantasy
Number of chapters you’d like me to read: 3
Which chapters would you like me to read? Chapters 1-3
How would you like your feedback given to you? At the end of each chapter please
Payment Option Selected: Option 2
Anything else? Nope :slight_smile:


#70

That’s perfectly okay! I’ll get right to it!


#71

Thanks! I don’t know if it’s a genre you’ll like it’s a ya contemporary. I would say it’s not thrilling yet but it’s definitely different.

author: @besmabesma3

*book title:*Therapy sessions of an almost functioning human

genre: YA- humor

OPTION ONE: I want feedback on part I - session 4

link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/173039606-therapy-sessions-of-an-almost-functioning-human

SUMMARY In which this girl tries to make her way through life while trying not to take the absurdity of existence too seriously.

"-I had a horribly busy day converting oxygen into carbon dioxide.

-Fair enough."

Here’s a little quote

I waved at her and made my way down the stairs and through the glass door of the building. I closed it, feeling the cold handle on my fingers and the crispy winter air engulf me in a warm embrace.
What a lovely day not to commit suicide, I thought to myself before heading to my house
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#72

Payment complete!


#73

[SORRY]

Since you’re requesting I critique 3 chapters of your story, both payment options must be completed. Let me know if that’s okay and I’ll go ahead and accept your request.

Thank you!


#74

[ACCEPTED]

Perfect, you may go ahead and complete the payments. I will add you to the queue.

Thank you!


#75

[ACCEPTED]

You may go ahead and complete the payment.

Thank you!


#76

Donee


#77

I can do both options then


#78

[ACCEPTED]

Perfect, you may go ahead and complete the payments. I will add you to the queue.

Thank you!


#79

4 SPOTS LEFT FOR THE MONTH OF FEBRUARY


#80

[HI THERE!]

You have yet to complete your payment – a comment on the first chapter of my story, Eleutheromaniac – if you’re still interested in me completing your critique let me know!