[Classic’s Critiques] - OPEN


#1

WELCOME TO CLASSIC’S CRITIQUES

This little critique thread is part of my New Years resolution to become more involved with the writing community, make more writer friends, and assist others in bettering their craft.

OFFERED SERVICES

I am willing to provide honest and constructive feedback on up to three chapters of your story. During my critique, I will focus on what I believe works, what needs improvement, and my overall thoughts. If you have any other specific requests/things you want me to look out for please mention it in the anything else section of the form.

Critiques can be delivered in three different ways:

  • At the end of each chapter
  • Through in-line comments
  • Privately through direct message

I specialize in character development, description/visualization, dialogue and pacing. I do not consider myself proficient in catching grammar or spelling mistakes.

GENRES

I specialize in Teen Fiction (YA and NA included), Romance, Paranormal, and Humor as that’s mostly what I spend my time reading. However, I am open to all genres.

Disclaimer: I have the right to decline a request for any reason.

PAYMENT

OPTION ONE: Read the first chapter of my story, Eleutheromaniac, and leave a 2-lined comment.

OPTION TWO: Add my story, Eleutheromaniac, to one of your public reading lists and a permenant follow.

Important: If you are asking me to read three chapters of your story please ensure you complete both payments.

Please do not proceed with payment unless I have accepted your request!


#2

FORM

Story Title:
Link:
Genre:
Number of chapters you’d like me to read: 1 / 2 / 3
Which chapters would you like me to read?
How would you like your feedback given to you?
Payment Option Selected:
Anything else?


#3

WAITLIST

user | post | payment | critique

darphy | 57 | complete | complete

jgrace2197 | 60 | complete | complete

_quinta | 61 | complete | complete

clovdyskiies | 62 | complete | complete

besamabesma3 | 71 | complete | in progress

The_Twi1ight_Prince | 69 | incomplete | in progress

empty spot | — | — — | — —

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#4

I would love some feedback on my story (if you enjoy reading it, feel free to keep on reading!)
**Story Title:**The Legend of the Moonflower Princess
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/659085416-the-legend-of-the-moonflower-princess-where-the
Genre: Fantasy, Epic Fantasy, High Fantasy
Number of Chapters you’d like me to read: 1-3
How would you like your feedback given to you? Comments inline or at the end of each chapter are fine
Payment Option Selected: Option 1
Anything else? I’ve already gotten critiqued on the length of my descriptions, so you don’t need to critique them if you don’t want to


#5

Hello! Waves :calmwolf:

Would you mind doing it via Google docs? If not that’s okay :blush:


#6

Hi there!

You seem to have forgotten to fill out the payment option in your request form. Once you have selected an option I’ll go ahead and accept your request.

Thank you!


#7

Hi there!

Yup, that’s perfectly okay with me. If you’d like, you can fill out the form and then link me to the document through DM.

Thanks for your interest!


#8

Title: Just Survive
Genre: Science Fiction
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/149799241-just-survive
2 chapters
In line comments
Payment 1


#9

[ACCEPTED]

Please let me know which two chapters you’d like me to critique. You may go ahead and complete the payment.

Thank you!


#10

Chapters one and two. The prologue is short, and provides some insight on the story, but is not necessary. Thank you! I’ll let you know when payment has been completed!


#11

**Story Title:**Fractured Red
Link: (PM if accepted :calmwolf:)
**Genre:**Werewolf/adventure
Number of Chapters you’d like me to read: 1 / 2 / 3 Either or, I won’t make you read something you don’t enjoy, so just read up until you find yourself not enjoying it!
How would you like your feedback given to you? In-line please Suggestion Mode
Payment Option Selected: Number One please!
**Anything else?**I’d really like to know your thoughts on Red, and the pacing. Thank you!
Here’s a summary in case you wanted it :slight_smile:


#12

payment completed


#13

Story Title: Band Aid Love
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/173419039-band-aid-love
Genre: Teen Fiction
Number of Chapters you’d like me to read: 1 / 2 / 3
How would you like your feedback given to you? Privately through direct message
Payment Option Selected: Option 2
Anything else?


#14

Story Title: Be Alright
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/173772174-be-alright
**Genre:**Romance
Number of Chapters you’d like me to read: 1 / 2 / 3
How would you like your feedback given to you? However is more convenient to you!
Payment Option Selected: Option one
Anything else? No, thank you!


#15

Title: Dangerous Attachment
Link: https://my.w.tt/RmIz4BUFkT
Genre: Teen Fiction/YA
Chapters to read: 3
Feedback: preferably through PM
Payment option: 1 or 2, although I’ve done both already I think.
Anything else? Nope, that’s all!


#16

Story Title: The Minerva Prophecy
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/171430081-the-minerva-prophecy
Genre: Science fantasy
Number of Chapters you’d like me to read: Chapters 1-3
How would you like your feedback given to you? Comments inline or at end of each chapter. Either one works for me. Thank you.
Payment Option Selected: Option 1


#17

[ACCEPTED]

Go ahead and complete the payment and send the link through DM.

Thanks!


#18

[ACCEPTED]

You may go ahead and complete the payment.

Thank you!


#19

[ACCEPTED]

You may go ahead and complete the payment.

Thank you!


#20

[ACCEPTED]

LOL don’t worry about a payment, you already do more than enough for me!

Thank you!