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#403

same… but its not like people are doing those where im from but i wouldn’t mind trying it out before ditching it in the comforts of my own home… you’re probably subscribed to alot of news channels and newspapers


#404

You want me to take a gander at those chapters? I can do that, sure.

Anyone here looking to publish someday? I can advise on that, too. I’ve been kicking around the writing community for a long time (although I’m new here on Wattpad)


#405

Yeah just gimme 5 minutes and I’ll have like the first 5 up


#406

Yep, no rush, I’m just here at the computer working on my own stuff


#407

Yeah. Good ol toronto star


#408

And first 4 up


#409

I’ll go have a look. You want me to leave a critique in the comments?


#410

All advice totally welcome


#411

Thanks!


#412

Well, I picked over your first chapter - pretty good, man. Good work. I’ll go over the rest tomorrow, I gotta get some work done myself before bed.


#413

Hey!


#414

Hello!


#415

Oh at your own pace please! I am so grateful for anyone who would take the time to read my work. Really appreciate the feedback so far


#416

Hey, no sweat, I put it on my reading list. Tossed you a vote, too. It’s not a chore, because it’s not all effed up and full of spelling mistakes, lol. You’re doing a fine job.


#417

i feel like every country has a newspaper with the word star on it


#418

yep, and a times and gazette


#419

chronicles and issue… but its cute though, like no matter how far apart we are in terms of religions, political beliefs, race and sexuality… newspaper companies still use the same titles on their newspapers… a sense of unity… lmao


#420

it’s not the best but oh well…


#421

I’ll Leave the karaoke link for the Title song


#422

thanks dude