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#42

I’ve completed your feedback. Hope it helps!


#43

I’ve completed your feed back. Hope it helps!


#44

The first five would be good :slight_smile: I’m looking forward to reading your work


#45

Sounds good to me. Let me know if you want to continue after those first five. I look forward to working with you and will try and keep pace with you (you read, i read as stated above).


#46

I’ve posted your feedback. Hope it helps!


#47

I’ve went through the prologue which is short and chapter one of your novel which is very long. Lol. I’ll do more later but just wanted to let you know I started!


#48

Title: The Shot
Genre: Mystery/Comedy
Synopsis: When a young man commits an atrocity for a reason unbeknownst to him, he must find out why he carried out the crime whilst evading the law and more importantly understand why none of the witnesses have come forward. A dark and comedic look into a subject not often seen in fiction.
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/178304487-the-shot
Option: 3
Payment Completed? Yes, starting The Autumn Tree after I finish typing. Hopefully it should be good!


#49

I’d like to post my novel but I have had enough feedback already on the 1st and 2nd chapters. Are you willing to have a look at 3 individual chapters?


#50

Title: Masks
Genre: I’m thinking Psychological Horror/ Crime Thriller
Synopsis: Psychological horror exploring the mind of a character who has become completely unhinged when life throws her in a direction that she never saw coming. A loss too much for her brain to bare starts to blur her hold on reality. The lines between reality and delusion are sometimes thinner than they appear.
Note This is a SUPER rough draft and I’m kind of just wondering if it’s an interesting concept to anyone. Link: www.w a t tpad. com/st o ry/ 175948154-masks (Sorry about the broken up link. I’m new to Wattpad and am locked down on links :sweat_smile:
Option: Option 2
Payment Completed? Will follow now and will starting reading The Autumn Tree shortly!


#51

Accepted. You said you wanted a total of 4 chapters, or start with 4?


#52

Yeah, you’re more than welcome to use option 3 for as many chapters as you’d like. were you looking specifically for chapter three?


#53

I get that. If you look at the community rules, it will unlock link sharing for you. Also, you’re accepted.


#54

A total of 4 as its a short story with only 4 chapters in total