Crawl » Finish That Manuscript! V2


#101

Welcome to the national championships, High Ranker!

You’re up against Kajitsu, a girl who uses Windstorm. In your match, you sense something odd. In the end, she defeats your Clash deck.

You follow her out. You come across a white-haired boy, Yuuki, who’s searching for her, too, and you. When you find her, she activates a strange power.

Her butterflies carry you through a portal.

Write for ten minutes as they do.

128

You’ve arrived in a strange place called Gran Rolo. You meet Zungurii and the Otherworld Witch, Magisa, there. Strange men try to kidnap you. The only way to stop them is to play Battle Spirits.

Write for ten minutes as you have your first battle in Gran Rolo.

169

Yuuki challenges you to a match. If you win, he’ll tell you where Zungrii’s family is.

Write for twenty-five minutes as you have your battle with him. He’s very difficult to read.

326

You and Zungurii argue over his attempts to make you curry. Compared to what you got at home, it’s very spicy. He storms off to find his family, saying you’re going home to eat your family’s curry.

While he’s gone, he finds an X-rare card but passes out from a fall. A man finds and rescues him also giving your friend green curry. To repay the man, he tries to give the man the X-rare. The man asks to be repaid by meeting you. Unbeknownst to you all, he was an enemy who wanted to bring you to Otherworld King.

Write for fifteen minutes as you fight him and his Swift monsters. After you win, he gives you the X-rare your friend found as it suits you better.

158

After you set out again, you’ve found yourself in sweltering weather. Your Magisa stops you and Zungurii from stopping. He then finds a stream. You then stumble on a cat-eared girl who was fishing. She runs off frightened, so you follow her to her village to return the fish. There, you meet the leader, Sophia, and their bodyguard, Clackey Ray, a fellow high-ranker.

To get you to leave, he challenges you to a match. Write for fifteen minutes as you try to win to prove your innocence.

260

You won! Now the people of the Mimi village are treating your group handsomely. Clackey still hasn’t warmed up to you yet, though. Anyway, the next day you run into the group the Mimi people thought you were, the Deathmatch Group. After Magisa throws you and Clackey off your post. Since you got up first, you get to fight the Dark Lord, Jin.

Write for twenty minutes as you fight with your awful opening hand. After you win, you will be exhausted, but Clackey will also have warmed up to you and compliments your match.

264

You’re still in the Mimi Village. Sophia wants to show you the guardian deity’s shrine. There, you find the card collector, Suzuri Hideto. He loves X-rares, and you have to fight him to stop him from taking the guardian deity. Write for fifteen minutes as you do.

202

Clackey isn’t as keen on walking, so Zungurii carries you both ‘til he sees a Card Stand. There you meet Viole Mai who was looking for a specific opponent. Write for ten minutes as you watch their match.

161

You’re on Mai’s ship. Meanwhile, Yuuki has to fight Belga for Walhance, a powerful white X-rare. Write for ten minutes as they do.

168

You’ve made it to the red land. A gate and powerful barrier stand in your way. Write for ten minutes as Clackey battles the gatekeeper to unlock her heart and restore her smile.

152

In the red land, you find the horizon ladder. There, you find Zungurii’s family and others who were taken from the Mimi village. Along with guards, Yuuki and Kajitsu stand in your way. You must defeat Kajitsu if you want another chance at Yuuki. Write for twenty minutes as you fight her and discover her incredible power.

398

Mai feels like the spotlight has been taken from her, so she leaves. Clackey has a match with her to feel her out. Write for ten minutes as they do.

200

You’ve come across the former red soldier, Julian, at a card stand in the blue world. He’s told you not to fight Otherworld King and shown off his trump card, Meteorwurm. You want to see this spirit and to get his help. Write for fifteen minutes as you do.

111

You’ve arrived at the Grand Rolo Championships! You, Clackey, and others have made it past the gunslinger! Your first opponent is Gaana, a king from the green world. Zungurii and Magisa ate the chocolate he offered, not knowing it was his way of asking for her hand in marriage. Write for fifteen minutes as you fight for their freedom and yours.

266

You meet a girl, Seiru, who had an encounter with the Dark Lord, Jin. She wanted his cards and to learn to play Battle Spirits. Everyone was hesitant. Clackey agrees to help. He goes up against Lightspeed Shula. Write for ten minutes as you watch. Clackey wins, Shula abandons revenge, and Clackey gets an X-rare from Seiru.

114

During the semi-finals, Suzuri fights a kid you met recently, Kenzo Hyoudou. Problem is, in his quest for X-rares, he got possessed by a demonic spirit. Write fifteen minutes as they battle.

180

You’ve made it to the finals! As has Kenzo. Write for twenty minutes as you duke it out!

293

You wanted to free the Otherworlders with your wish. This can’t happen, so you request a match with Otherworld King. To get it, you had to beat Brustorm. If you lost, you had to become Yuuki’s servant. Write for twenty-five minutes as you fight Brustorm.

400

You lost and became Yuuki’s servant. He was going to take you to Otherworld King, Pantera said to. This was a lie. Pantera wanted to fight you. Write for twenty-five minutes as you do.

380

While everyone took care of Kajitsu, you got an audience with the Otherworld King. You’re battling to free everyone. Write for half an hour as you do.

493

Yuuki returns you to the others. You’re in rough shape, though. To protect you, Mai sneaks off with the dummy balloon of the ship. Write for twenty minutes as she does.

114

While you’re still asleep, Yuuki tries to get Suzuri to join him. Write for fifteen as they face off.

251

Kenzo and the others had to fight to protect Kajitsu. You were traumatized to. Kenzou’s battle resurrected your spirit, though. Onward to Mai!

Mai got kidnapped by a Mazoku called Namii. You had to go to the purple world to save her. There, you and Clackey had to face Brustorm and his family. After this, Mai had to fight Namii. Write for ten minutes as she does.

143

You reunite with Yuuki’s group as allies. You then get blocked by Leon who wants Kajitsu. Yuuki fights to stop this as Zungurii, Suzuri, and Kenzou leave to get you all free. Write for fifteen minutes as this happens.

236

You need to destroy the Horizon Ladders. To do this, you split up. You go in knowing you might become the sun. Write for twenty-five minutes as everyone battles.

308

Earth and a section of Gran Rolo have been connected. The leaders convened to plan. One of the presidents met Otherworld King and was sent to oppose you. You won’t let him stop you. Write for ten minutes as you oppose him.

138

You got Magisa’s deck back. She then got her true power back. After this happens, Yuuki and Kajitsu visit their old house. You and the others try to go after them but magic traps you in the ship.

Yuuki and Kajitsu are confronted by a doll controlled by Otherworld King. It doesn’t go well. The Green Windstorm ceases…

You are later confronted by Leon who wants to get rid of you. Write for fifteen minutes as Magisa fights him.

258

You and the others split up to make moves. You and Zungurii stay with Yuuki. Green butterflies lead you to Otherworld King. Yuuki fights him and loses. He tells you, you can use your symbols as a tribute to resurrect Kajitsu. Write for fifteen minutes as you fight to decide who it’ll be.

169

The end is near at hand. You now have to fight Otherworld King to end the conflict. Write for thirty minutes as you do.

439

The battle is over. As agreed, you take Mother Core from Otherworld King. It’s too intense for an ordinary human. You’ve done enough. A grateful Magisa takes it from you to become a shining goddess. You’re free to go back to your old life. Everyone is happy.


#102

5 minutes: 122
TC: 122

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TC: 481


#103

Yo a new crawl that I’m gonna do:

Zombie Apocalypse Crawl

STAGE 1- PREPARATION

Reading up: You’ve read enough on zombies to know the prevailing theories and are recognised as an expert. Write 250 words to present at a conference.

A stronghold: You spend a few afternoons making sure that your house is well protected. Do a 10 minute word war. If you win take a deep breath and relax, if you lose spend another day working outdoors and write the winner’s word count in as much time as you need.

Target practice: Bring your weapons and practice shooting by doing five one minute sprints.

Gathering supplies: Check your savings account and see if you have any extra cash. (set to 1-8) The more money you have the longer it takes to shop. Sprint that many hundred words. If you roll a seven or eight you are well stocked and can skip a supply run!

The beginning: You see a news report about a mysterious disease. You recognise the symptoms. Do a song war to this song.

STAGE 2-SURVIVAL

The first kill: Your friendly neighbour breaks through your defences. A brief struggle ensues. Sprint for ten minutes to survive!

Insomnia: Your nerves are shot and you find it hard to sleep. Do a three digit challenge in 25 minutes to help you drift off.

Survivors: You hear a knock at the door and realise there are living people begging for your help. If you decide to rescue them it’ll be a struggle equivalent of facing a 50 headed hydra . If you fail or let them die guilt consumes you. Write as many hundred words as there are humans in your closest friend’s household.

Supply Run: You wasted a lot of bullets and you’d better see if you can find more before the neighbourhood is picked through! Sprint based on where you live. Everyone knows the more densely populated an area is the more zombies there will be! (Urban-500 words. Suburban-300 words. Rural- 100 words)

A New Place To Live: You meet a stranger who tells you about his base. If you bring your supplies you can live with them. Pack your bags and be prepared for a long trek. Learn more about this fellow survivor on the trip by doing a 20 minute sprint.

Raising Moral: There are a lot of friendly folks living in this well fortified warehouse. Roll a die. Odds and you raise moral by making new friends and having some friendly competition with a 10 minute world war. Evens and you give them some encouragement in these hard times. Go send some kind words to a writing buddy using NaNoMail.

Supply Run: Rumours are running rampant about an approaching herd of zombies, make another supply run just to be safe using the same rules above!

The Battle: A crowd of the living dead approaches. Quick ready your weapons! Do five one minute sprints. Finish with a ten minute word war. Lose and you and the other survivors die. Challenge over.

Optional: You can be saved if you can convince a fellow crawl participant to sprint 500 words for you.

Celebration: You survived and someone nicked some board games and booze on the supply run. You’re feeling a little woozy from the drinks and suck an exhausting day. Type for five minutes using only one hand.

A Dawn Surprise: You hear voices in the morning and discover more survivors are at your doors, they’re yelling something about a cure. That can’t be right can it? Take a three digit challenge to find out.

STAGE 3-THE HUNT FOR A CURE

The W.H.O.: The World Health Organisation has developed a cure. This survivor claims to be a doctor whose helicopter crashed. If you can get her to an airport she and the pilot can take you all to safety. An argument breaks out in camp over whether you trust these strangers. Take a deep breath and clear your head with a half an hour of no pressure writing.

An Airport: You decide you can’t stay here forever. You and several others go with the strangers. They have credentials so you think you can trust them. Airports aren’t always easy to find. Sprint to the nearest one based on where you live. (Urban-100 words. Suburban- 250 words. Rural- 500 words)

Gate Crashing: It’s no longer just for parties, Quick roll a die and sprint that many hundred words!

The Flight: High above the land it’s the first time you’ve truly been able to relax. You close your eyes and drift off to sleep. Only to be awoken by nightmares. Shake it off with as many words as you can write in 1 minute.

Arrival: It’s an island military complex.You are thanked and welcomed with a hot meal. You sit and have a chat with the doctor and a couple of scientists. They seem nervous when you ask for the truth. Compete in 5 minute word wars until you are victorious to learn why.

The Doctor’s Lie: She runs her hands through her hair and tells you that there is no cure. But there will be. She had to lie to get you to help her. You feel betrayed. Walk away and write 250 words to clear your head.

Looks like you’ll be staying here for a while, at least you’re pretty safe for now.


#104

so, this is what I’ll be working on…

6am: roll a die, if you land on an even number, you wake up on time. You have time to read some tabloids. Sprint 6 minutes. If you land on an odd number, you oversleep. Sprint 5 minutes for 250 words. If you don’t reach 250, sprint for another 3 minutes.

Even number, so going for six minutes; 161 words.

6:15am: you go downstairs and make yourself a cup of coffee. Sprint for 5 minutes.

150 words.

`6:30am: you hurry to Luke’s for breakfast with Rory. You have 40 seconds to round your total word count up to the nearest hundred.

Total word count is 311, so have to go for 400.

-If you succeed… You enjoy a nice breakfast with Rory. Write without a word count goal for 5 minutes.

-If you fail… You have an argument with Taylor on your way to the diner. Write 250 words.

I failed (only managed to get to 343), so here we go, Taylor. (7 minutes)

6:35am: you order breakfast at Luke’s. You choose…

-eggs and bacon… Sprint 3 minutes.

-french toast… Sprint 10 minutes for 400 words. If you miss the goal… You distract Luke and he burns your food. You then order eggs and bacon. If you reach the goal, your breakfast comes out perfectly and you can move on with your day.

-only a coffee… Sprint 15 minutes for 600 words. If you miss the goal… Luke tells you to order something more nutritious. Pick another order.

Going for coffee! In 15 minutes, 600 words… and I got 590.:roll_eyes: Well, let’s try eggs and bacon instead. (3 minutes, 185 words.)

Total count so far: 1679

7:00am: you get to work at the Independence Inn and plan out the day with Sookie. Pick a prompt from another thread OR sprint for 30 minutes with a 1,000 word goal . If you reach the goal, move on. If you miss the goal, you get an upset customer. Sprint for 10 minutes.

I’m taking the 30 minutes/1000 word goal, but am gonna split this up in two blocks of fifteen minutes, hoping I succeed at a goal for once.
First block: 576 words (going strong!)
Second block: 490 words
Total: 1066 :slight_smile:

8:00am: your day is going great… until… you get a call from your mother. You…

-ignore it… Your mother becomes upset with you. Participate in a word war of your choice in length with someone.

-answer it… You try to talk your way out of having a full conversation with your mother. Sprint for 6 minutes.

I like a challenge, so answering it is!
6 minutes: 233 words

11:00am: Sookie asks you to taste test a new recipe of hers before she serves it. Sprint 600 words in 15 minutes. Miss the goal, and try again. Repeat until you win or until you hit a total of 1,500 words.

That’s gonna be tough… But another challenge nonetheless :slight_smile:
… 715 words! That must be a record for me - I’ve been doing so bad lately :sweat_smile:

12:00pm: time for your lunch break. Sprint until you round off total your word count to the next thousand.

Total word count is 3693, so gotta round it off to 4k.
I wrote 403 words in 9 minutes (a little more than necessary, but more is never a bad thing).

1:00pm: you’re out of coffee. Sprint for 3 minutes, rest for 2, sprint for 4, rest for 2, sprint for 5, rest for 2.

3 minutes: 139 words
4 minutes: 165 words
5 minutes: 181 words

2:00pm: a window breaks at the inn. Do you…

-call a handyman- cost: sprint 150 words … Your gutters are cleaned with no additional trouble.

-call Kirk- cost: sprint 75 words … Kirk ends up furthering the damage. Now you have to pay for a handyman and a box of band-aids. Sprint 200 words.

Life is more fun with Kirk in it - I’m calling Kirk!
75 words: 1 minute, 40 seconds
200 words: 4 minutes

Total count so far: 4856

4:00pm: you head to business school for your night class. Time for an exam. To pass, write 1,000 words in 30 minutes. If you fail, make up the score with extra credit. Sprint for another 15 minutes.

Am splitting this up in two blocks, again.
15 minutes: 610 words
15 minutes: 590 words

7:00pm: now for your favorite (not) part of every week: Friday Night Dinner. Do you…

-try and get out of going… Sprint for 5 minutes. Richard and Emily catch your lying and make you come to dinner.

-go and try to have a positive attitude about it… Sprint 10 minutes for 300 words. If you succeed, dinner goes well. If you don’t reach the goal, you make a careless comment during dinner that ends in a fight with Emily. Sprint 5 minutes.

Positivity is the best solution. I’m sprinting for ten minutes.
10 minutes: 433

10:00pm: finally, time to relax and watch TV with Rory before bed. Sprint until you round out your total word count to the next thousand.

Total word count is 6489, so rounding it off to 7000. Took me 11 minutes.

And I’m DONE :sweat_smile: This feels so good wow


#105

This isn’t a crawlbut it’s morelike a personal challenge to keep me motivated.

@RobotAmbassador - roll 3d100


#106

Hi! To find out what I can do, say @RobotAmbassador display help.


#107

roll 3 d100


#109

Doing 8d10 challenge:

7: 337
7 199

1: 62
2: 64

1: 62
9: 337

4: 156
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#110

2nd run konpuriito


#111

It’s stormy sailing as Odysseus tries to return home. Wrestle with the weather for 300 words as you get blown further and further off course.

Took me six minutes.

You reach the Isle of the Lotus Eaters. Write three paragraphs as you have a good time, but don’t stay too long – you might not want to leave! If it took longer than one minute, write an additional three paragraphs.

Made it: did three paragraphs in exactly one minute, 40 words.

You arrive at the island of the Cyclops. In order to talk your way out of trouble, write 400 words in 10 minutes or less.
-If you succeed, you’re free to leave the island. Jog to the nearest thousand.
-If you fail, you’re forced to treat the Cyclops to alcoholic drinks as you try and sneak away. Hurry! Sprint for 20 minutes.

You land yourself in trouble on the island of the cannibal Laestrygonians. Have a word war as you try and fight them or write 1k words.

The sorceress Circe captures your men and turns them into pigs! Have a word war or sprint for 10 minutes for 500 words. If you succeed, she lets you go. If you lose, try again until you win or reach 2k words.

Hold your nerve as you sail between the monster Scylla and the whirlpool Charybdis. Roll a dice.
When it’s an odd number: you have to go past Scylla. Circe has advised you to sail as fast as possible past her. Sprint 400 words.
When it’s an even number, you have to go past Charybdis, but she drowns your ship. Swim to survive: sprint 800 words.

You order your men to stuff their ears as you sail past the seductive sirens. Write for 30 minutes without a break!

Calypso keeps you captive on her island for seven years. Sprint for seven minutes as you wait for her to let you return home.

You arrive home to find your wife Penelope beset by unwanted suitors. Prove to them that you’re Odysseus.
-If your total word count is below 5500, sprint 1k words.
-If your total word count is above 5500, round it off to the nearest thousand.


#112

Welcome to the national championships, High Ranker!

You’re up against Kajitsu, a girl who uses Windstorm. In your match, you sense something odd. In the end, she defeats your Clash deck.

You follow her out. You come across a white-haired boy, Yuuki, who’s searching for her, too, and you. When you find her, she activates a strange power.

Her butterflies carry you through a portal.

Write for ten minutes as they do.

194

You’ve arrived in a strange place called Gran Rolo. You meet Zungurii and the Otherworld Witch, Magisa, there. Strange men try to kidnap you. The only way to stop them is to play Battle Spirits.

Write for ten minutes as you have your first battle in Gran Rolo.

129

Yuuki challenges you to a match. If you win, he’ll tell you where Zungrii’s family is.

Write for twenty-five minutes as you have your battle with him. He’s very difficult to read.

273

You and Zungurii argue over his attempts to make you curry. Compared to what you got at home, it’s very spicy. He storms off to find his family, saying you’re going home to eat your family’s curry.

While he’s gone, he finds an X-rare card but passes out from a fall. A man finds and rescues him also giving your friend green curry. To repay the man, he tries to give the man the X-rare. The man asks to be repaid by meeting you. Unbeknownst to you all, he was an enemy who wanted to bring you to Otherworld King.

Write for fifteen minutes as you fight him and his Swift monsters. After you win, he gives you the X-rare your friend found as it suits you better.

After you set out again, you’ve found yourself in sweltering weather. Your Magisa stops you and Zungurii from stopping. He then finds a stream. You then stumble on a cat-eared girl who was fishing. She runs off frightened, so you follow her to her village to return the fish. There, you meet the leader, Sophia, and their bodyguard, Clackey Ray, a fellow high-ranker.

To get you to leave, he challenges you to a match. Write for fifteen minutes as you try to win to prove your innocence.

You won! Now the people of the Mimi village are treating your group handsomely. Clackey still hasn’t warmed up to you yet, though. Anyway, the next day you run into the group the Mimi people thought you were, the Deathmatch Group. After Magisa throws you and Clackey off your post. Since you got up first, you get to fight the Dark Lord, Jin.

Write for twenty minutes as you fight with your awful opening hand. After you win, you will be exhausted, but Clackey will also have warmed up to you and compliments your match.

You’re still in the Mimi Village. Sophia wants to show you the guardian deity’s shrine. There, you find the card collector, Suzuri Hideto. He loves X-rares, and you have to fight him to stop him from taking the guardian deity. Write for fifteen minutes as you do.

Clackey isn’t as keen on walking, so Zungurii carries you both ‘til he sees a Card Stand. There you meet Viole Mai who was looking for a specific opponent. Write for ten minutes as you watch their match.

You’re on Mai’s ship. Meanwhile, Yuuki has to fight Belga for Walhance, a powerful white X-rare. Write for ten minutes as they do.

You’ve made it to the red land. A gate and powerful barrier stand in your way. Write for ten minutes as Clackey battles the gatekeeper to unlock her heart and restore her smile.

In the red land, you find the horizon ladder. There, you find Zungurii’s family and others who were taken from the Mimi village. Along with guards, Yuuki and Kajitsu stand in your way. You must defeat Kajitsu if you want another chance at Yuuki. Write for twenty minutes as you fight her and discover her incredible power.

Mai feels like the spotlight has been taken from her, so she leaves. Clackey has a match with her to feel her out. Write for ten minutes as they do.

You’ve come across the former red soldier, Julian, at a card stand in the blue world. He’s told you not to fight Otherworld King and shown off his trump card, Meteorwurm. You want to see this spirit and to get his help. Write for fifteen minutes as you do.

You’ve arrived at the Grand Rolo Championships! You, Clackey, and others have made it past the gunslinger! Your first opponent is Gaana, a king from the green world. Zungurii and Magisa ate the chocolate he offered, not knowing it was his way of asking for her hand in marriage. Write for fifteen minutes as you fight for their freedom and yours.

You meet a girl, Seiru, who had an encounter with the Dark Lord, Jin. She wanted his cards and to learn to play Battle Spirits. Everyone was hesitant. Clackey agrees to help. He goes up against Lightspeed Shula. Write for ten minutes as you watch. Clackey wins, Shula abandons revenge, and Clackey gets an X-rare from Seiru.

During the semi-finals, Suzuri fights a kid you met recently, Kenzo Hyoudou. Problem is, in his quest for X-rares, he got possessed by a demonic spirit. Write fifteen minutes as they battle.

You’ve made it to the finals! As has Kenzo. Write for twenty minutes as you duke it out!

You wanted to free the Otherworlders with your wish. This can’t happen, so you request a match with Otherworld King. To get it, you had to beat Brustorm. If you lost, you had to become Yuuki’s servant. Write for twenty-five minutes as you fight Brustorm.

You lost and became Yuuki’s servant. He was going to take you to Otherworld King, Pantera said to. This was a lie. Pantera wanted to fight you. Write for twenty-five minutes as you do.

While everyone took care of Kajitsu, you got an audience with the Otherworld King. You’re battling to free everyone. Write for half an hour as you do.

Yuuki returns you to the others. You’re in rough shape, though. To protect you, Mai sneaks off with the dummy balloon of the ship. Write for twenty minutes as she does.

While you’re still asleep, Yuuki tries to get Suzuri to join him. Write for fifteen as they face off.

Kenzo and the others had to fight to protect Kajitsu. You were traumatized to. Kenzou’s battle resurrected your spirit, though. Onward to Mai!

Mai got kidnapped by a Mazoku called Namii. You had to go to the purple world to save her. There, you and Clackey had to face Brustorm and his family. After this, Mai had to fight Namii. Write for ten minutes as she does.

You reunite with Yuuki’s group as allies. You then get blocked by Leon who wants Kajitsu. Yuuki fights to stop this as Zungurii, Suzuri, and Kenzou leave to get you all free. Write for fifteen minutes as this happens.

You need to destroy the Horizon Ladders. To do this, you split up. You go in knowing you might become the sun. Write for twenty-five minutes as everyone battles.

Earth and a section of Gran Rolo have been connected. The leaders convened to plan. One of the presidents met Otherworld King and was sent to oppose you. You won’t let him stop you. Write for ten minutes as you oppose him.

You got Magisa’s deck back. She then got her true power back. After this happens, Yuuki and Kajitsu visit their old house. You and the others try to go after them but magic traps you in the ship.

Yuuki and Kajitsu are confronted by a doll controlled by Otherworld King. It doesn’t go well. The Green Windstorm ceases…

You are later confronted by Leon who wants to get rid of you. Write for fifteen minutes as Magisa fights him.

You and the others split up to make moves. You and Zungurii stay with Yuuki. Green butterflies lead you to Otherworld King. Yuuki fights him and loses. He tells you, you can use your symbols as a tribute to resurrect Kajitsu. Write for fifteen minutes as you fight to decide who it’ll be.

The end is near at hand. You now have to fight Otherworld King to end the conflict. Write for thirty minutes as you do.

The battle is over. As agreed, you take Mother Core from Otherworld King. It’s too intense for an ordinary human. You’ve done enough. A grateful Magisa takes it from you to become a shining goddess. You’re free to go back to your old life. Everyone is happy.