I am Iloojin and I offer critique, review, critique+review, badass tough diary and sugar coating diary.
Each of them is called a diary and I offer my service for English and French books.
Whichever you choose will be posted in my book:
Here is a summary of each Diary (for more detail check the link):
Critique: Neutral point of view, useful tips
Review: Personal point of view, not useful tips (I am not a fan of this one)
Critique+Review: Both point of view and useful suggestions
Badass Tough Diary: The most complete critique I can give you will only contain your flaws
Sugar-coating Diary: Will only do the first three chapters maximum, I will only compliment your book
Depending on what you choose my diary might be useful to you but all of the stories I had given a diary were satisfied (unless I didn’t understand the sarcasm behind their words). I would suggest you to see the others diaries to see how I work.
I will not look at grammar (and such) mistakes
I will do every chapter requested so indeed, I do critique a whole book. However, please understand that I don’t have a good health and thus can’t get everything done in a day. And I may be absent sometimes, so if you want someone who is regularly present, I am not the one for you.
I will only do three chapters at a time before doing another story, by turn so you have to wait until it’s your turn again. However, you can request for as much as diaries you want (Chapters 1-3: Critique; Chapter 4-5: Review; etc.).
I have a very good memory so I only need to read a book once since it’ll stay in my head for years. Therefore, if I gave you a critique before and you are requesting another one after editing it, I can easily compare it. I need a couple of hours to read three chapters since I have to analyse everything but your diary is usually done after a few days (after I read it). So I’ll ask to be patient. If you pressure or rush me, I’ll give you an incomplete/half-assed diary. I cannot work under those conditions.
The payment depends on how many chapters you ask me:
Here is a brief summary:
For less than ten chapters
=> Comment on another diary (before requesting or directly after you requested)
=> Say something about your diary, a “thanks” is enough if you don’t know what to say
For more than ten chapters:
=>Comment on every diary
=>Comment on all diaries that are going to be posted
=>Temporaly, follow me until all chapters you have requested are done. It’s easier for me to give the dedication
If you are interested by my services, please either leave a comment at the form chapter (first link) or click on the link below (second link), otherwise it’ll be a mess for me to organise it:
Another important point concerning my skills:
This is an extract from my book, if you cannot understand something it’s normal
I accept almost every genre except Lesbian Book for personal reasons and I am not very well informed on that question, so I believe there are people better than me on that question.
I don’t usually accept fanfiction (manga, books, movies). I only do when the protagonist is a full antihero (I don’t mind OCC) and you’ll have to write at least five lines about the fandom unless I know it.
If you are going to ask me about the vampire and werewolf, explain it. Or be ready to answer every question that I am going to ask, and there are going to be a lot as I am not an expert on that. If your “world” is too difficult for me to read, I will stop reading and publish your Diary.
I ask the name of the mains characters for neutrality reason. If your protagonists have the same name as a character that I like/am used to, it will be difficult for me to contain the reader me. Especially if you ask for a review or a CR, she won’t stop comparing the characters (Merlin, Allisson, Lola, Arthur, Zac, etc.). And I can’t promise you that I can read all of your books at that moment.
If you have any question, feel free to ask