I read and critique the first chapter of your story and you do that same with mine. Just link your story and I’ll check it out. I won’t comment until you do the same with mine. Honest criticism please, no sugar coating.
Here is mine: https://www.wattpad.com/story/202665354-bone-and-blood
I’ve moved your thread to the #story-services:critiques-and-feedback area as that is the proper location for exchanging critiquing services. Users aren’t allowed to share or request stories in the #improve-your-writing area.
Also I had to edit out the mention of votes from your post. You’re not allowed to request people vote on their book as vote trading is against the guidelines.
link isnt working so i had to find it through your username
Oh sorry I’ll try to fix it.
My first chapter probably needs the least amount of critique but it never hurts to have more eyes on things. It’s later chapters that have the most typos and repeated words because I merged two versions of the document and ended up with some mistakes that my eyes just refuse to catch! Ug… But yeah, I’ll go give your chapter a read.
Finished. I loved it, I’ll try to make some time to continue reading past the first chapter.
I left you some critique on your other one as well. Hope its helping!
Yes, very much helping. Sorry I couldn’t give any advice on yours, I’ll let you know if I find anything in the other chapters. I probably won’t though.
May I ask why you’re not a fan of m9’s?
Dont like the way they fire, jam too easy and have to use them at work. They’ll get the job done though.
oh okay, makes sense.