If you’d like a bit more information going into the reading, the prologue is super short, but it’s not necessary
I can speak with an interpreter.
Hey, sorry I can’t read the language of your story so I can’t critique it
Sorry to bother you. )
sorry for taking a while to reply here Ive been working everyday and i finally got a day off. Thank you so much for your review and input! I really appreciate you taking your time to read my story!
So no to Star Wars?
I’m not into the whole Star Wars thing (surprising right?) but I can critique on your plot (assuming it is your plot and not set in the actual canon storyline?) and grammar
If you could that would be great! I only really have two chapters so far, so there isn’t a heap. And it isn’t really connected to any other stories at the moment. I am trying to make it open for everyone!
Title: Star Wars - The Fallen Order
Genre: Sci-fi/ Sci-fantasy
Hi there. If you’re still accepting, I’d like to get feedback on the first two chapters of my current story. Please let me know and I will begin reading your book
Title: Death City
Genre: Paranormal / Romance
I hope I completed payment correctly.
I would really like to get some critiques for my book, The Lost Queen. It’s a fantasy book. It only contains the prologue. But I would really like if you help me with some critiques.
Here is the link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/174351589-the-lost-queen
Great! I’ll get onto it today, thank you for the payment!
Hi! Yeah sure I’ll have your critique ready in a day or two, you may complete the payment whenever you feel like it! (May you do my chapters for my story This is our sunset, April 1 and April ? You may just point out any grammatical mistakes and other writing-related stuff )
Yeah, of course! I’ll have your critique done in a day or two! You may complete the payment whenever you’d like
Do you specifically want feedback on the story mentioned above or would you prefer feedback on any other stories?
Feedback on the story mentioned above