Short, funny, makes me want need to know more. It took me a while to connect the first paragraph’s idea to the second, and realise that the new PhD student might be a lizard person, but I think that’s more a fault of my comprehension than of your blurb I find this to be set up nicely, with an ideal level of revealing an intriguing concept without giving away too much of the actual plot.
Here’s my blurb for My Favourite Part:
Evangeline’s life is normal by all standards. But on Thursdays comes her 𝒻𝒶𝓋𝑜𝓊𝓇𝒾𝓉𝑒 𝓅𝒶𝓇𝓉.
Evangeline Channing is a good kid with a good life - great family and friends, not-so-great grades, but she’s happy, and that’s what matters most.
But for the past few months, she’s kept something a secret. Or rather, someone. Unknown to her family and even her closest friends, Evangeline is in love. He’s older. Richer. Most importantly, he’s her soulmate. But when everything is brought to the light, what price will she have to pay to navigate her newfound “happiness”? How long will it last?
A coming-of-age story.