So I used to see these games on the old clubs but haven’t seen them that much anymore; so I decided to start one because they were fun and really helpful.
Basically, you have to rate (out of 10) and then critique what the person posted above you before posting your passage that you want to be critiqued. You can just critique their writing style, vocabulary, and just the overall quality.
You can post your passage in blockquote (Ctrl+Shift+9) so people can differentiate your passage from your critique.
I will start by posting mine:
"Ryan you need to be more careful. Especially after what happened."
"Seems like you need to be more careful with that bagel." He pointed to the stain on his dad's uniform. He looked down and then chuckled a little.
"Carrie, the rag." His mom smiled throwing the rag on the counter and he picked it up, wiping off his shirt. "You know I'm serious though, Ryan."
He nodded. "I'm not doing anything dangerous." And he thought about the old house and the creaking stairs and the moldy walls and the ghost. Nothing dangerous at all.
Then Ryan's mother slid a plate of eggs and toast towards him. He ate it quickly and then went back to his room.