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Sounds interesting


Thank you so much! :smiley: :two_hearts:


Oh no problem! I still have to read a little more though haha


Thanks! :smile:


TITLE: Stargaze and Chill
GENRE: Romance
SYNOPSIS: For as long as Declan can remember, he and Nadia have been best friends. And for maybe about the same amount of time he has wanted something more. It’s okay, though. His love isn’t the stifling kind. He can totally manage loving Nadia from afar. But one daring game and a not-so-innocent kiss later, Declan isn’t so sure he can maintain the space and keep his feelings at bay any longer.






Take your time! :smiley:


I’m in the middle of your second chapter. I’m so sorry I had to go run some errands today.


Hey, I’d be interested in trading 3 chapters if you are!

Title: The Fall of Mangiatorvi
Genre: Young Adult, Fantasy
Blurb: Gemma has spent the majority of her life feeling like an outcast, struggling to hide her powers in a mortal world. Suddenly, in a whirlwind of violence that leaves her heartbroken, she is recruited to Mangiatrovi University for the Gifted. Under the dual mentorship of the crown prince and a gifted fighter with intimacy issues, she somehow manages to earn their loyalty. Tensions are rising in the government as the country is on the brink of both civil war and war with the bordering state. Gemma struggles to navigate a new world, searching for normalcy amongst friendships, romance, and politics.


All good! No rush! Honestly I want you to enjoy it more than I want you to hurry up and read so.


accepted I will start your review tomorrow


Title: 005-334
Genre: YA/Short Story (there might be romance later on, tho)
Number of chapters: 3
A little synopsis: the story of five sisters who are in bad terms with each other and create a shit storm via text messages and WhatsApp. That is, until the youngest of them throws a much bigger shit bomb. Plotting, lies and deceptions are on the menu, but is there going to be room for a little romance, too, right?






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I’m sorry!! I just got crammed with college stuff. Allow me a week of a grace period. I am enjoying all of your books and I will read them this weekend into next week! Please be patient! Again I’m so sorry


No worries take your time:)


That’s completely fine! You don’t need to rush :smile:


Don’t worry about it! :slight_smile:


completed I still plan on reading the rest of your book though!