I know that their are a lot of people out here looking for critique and feedback on their stories and I’d like to help out with that a bit. I am an ESL (English as a Second Language) teacher and a writer. I have a good grasp on how stories should be structured and how to make them publishable.
I will read the first five chapters of your story and provide you with critique.
If you’d like your story critiqued, please put the password ‘sunflower’ somewhere in your post.
If you’d like your story critiqued, I ask that, if you have the time, to read my two stories I have posted on Wattpad. You don’t need to do this, it would just be nice to reciprocate.
The first is ‘the Resemblance’, a work in progress psychological thriller. Please consider this story is for MATURE READERS only. It deals with adult themes and violence.
The second is ‘the Skip Premise’, a Sci-fi completed story.
And provide the following information:
Link to story:
Please bear in mind, I will share my honest opinions and feedback. I won’t coddle you but I will hopefully provide you with something constructive.
If you’d like your critique via private message, please let me know!