Reviews Offered (Round 1 - Closed)
Hello everyone, my name is Eliza! I love to read, and I am only recently startimg to write my own stories. I am still pretty knew to Wattpad but I found this forum and immediately fell in love with the idea.
As a budding author I know what we all want. FEEDBACK! So I have decided to offer my services to you lovely Wattpaders!
Together, we can refine our stories into literary MASTERPIECES!
Throughout your story I will leave several inline comments as well as a larger review at the end. Or if you prefer I can message it to you. Let me know which you prefer.
In my reviews I will be giving you honest and constructive feedback, focusing on:
The Plot (Coherency, Plot Holes, etc.)
The Characters (Initial thoughts, Appeal, Motivations, Impact on the Story, etc.)
The World Building (Scale, Depth, etc.)
The Author’s Style (Readability, etc.)
The Affect (What emotional response did it illicit from me?)
I will rate each of these out of 10, giving you a score out of 50.
Additionally I will be answering these six questions:
Did I like the story?
What was my favorite part of the story?
Do I have a least favorite part of the story?
If I could change something, what would it be?
Would I recommend this story to another person?
What type of person would like this story?
I will also feature the highest rated story from each week, right here (in this topic) and will announce to my followers. And if I really enjoy your story, I’ll continue reading and I will add to my reading list!
Payment will be split into three sections depending on how many chapters/parts you would like me to read.
1 Chapter/Part = A Follow + An Inline Comment on my Prologue
2 or 3 Chapters/Parts = A Follow + 2 Meaningful Comments on my Prologue
3 to 5 Chapters/Parts = A Follow + 3 Meaningful Comments on my Prologue
(At the moment, my schedule does not permit me to commit myself to reading more than 5 chapters of each story. However, if you are happy with my service, I am more than happy to accept rerequests.)
I’m open to absolutely any genre although I do reserve the right to turn down your request (for example, I will not accept anything of an overly sexual nature).
Please list the following:
Number of Chapter (5 Max)
I must also warn you all that my prologue is for a Star Wars Novel. So you have been warned. But if you are not a SW fan, do not let that scare you off, I appreciate any and all feedback especially from those who are not hardcore fans.
Please find it at this link: https://my.w.tt/8NOS8UlXVS
I hope you enjoy it, and I look forward to reading your stories.
@LinconJames - One Minute To Midnight (5 Chapters)
@GhostsInsideOfMyBed - Zeitgeist (5 Chapters)
@MeredithAll - The Crime in Callahan’s Morrow (5 Chapters)
@jgrace2197 - The Legend of the Moonflower Princess (Only 5 Chapters)
@sakuryox - Accidentally Bound (5 Chapters)
@bmecha - MACHINE AND MAGIC (2 Chapters)
@TheGreatSphinx - The Jewel of Florence (5 Chapters)
@sooppastar - A Cockroach in Brooklyn - A Darkly Amusing Short Story (3 Chapters)
@VanillaaJuliaa - Rosevelt (5 Chapters)
@shakespearian1 - Wing Girl for Prince Charming (5 Chapters)
@wandering1234 - The Adventures of Prince Vajendra (5 Chapters)
@Snirion - Macabre Marmalade (Overall Score - 29/50)
@RaphaelaLee - A Super Collection of Superhero (Overall Score - 11.5/50)
@Svoosh - The Song of Sqia’lon Seven (Overall Score - 34.5/50)
@Booksbeneaththebed - Why Are We Young (Overall Score - 27/50)
@LigerCat - Descent into Madness (Overall Score - 33/50)
@Andyjo1 - “The Blood of Queens” (Overall Score - 34/50)
Please be patient!