Face Journey's Critique [OPEN]

feedback-offered

#42

:smiley:
You’re very welcome! Editing will always be my first love which is why my writing is so slow since I am a bit obsessive.

I adore suspense and I like to imagine the readers face as the mystery unravels. The chapters that follow give you the answer that you seek :wink:
I really appreciate the feedback


#43

Again. I am reading it. Not putting out any writing mistakes :yum:


#44

You’ll be getting more tomorrow


#45

Bump

I don’t bite, do come in and request


#46

I have read the first chapter of your book before, but I never completed the payment because I didn’t know you wanted an inline comment.

THOUGHTS
Losing someone isn’t easy, I know lose better than a few people I can count on head and you showed it beautifully. That time stays with your character, as its apart of her and that makes seeing how she deals with the after math of her grief is going to be astounding to behold


#47

Thank you so much! <3 That means a lot :slight_smile:


#48

Anytime


#49

Blockquote

It’s true; she really doesn’t!


#50

Thanks in advance!


#51

Alright. Will add to my list


#52

Thank you!


#53

No prob


#54

This is going to die.

And I’m sort of okay with that.

Bump


#55

Title: Cursed Gardens
Genre: paranormal
Ongoing or Completed: Ongoing
What do you want me to know: Just as a note, there are two POV characters, so chapters go back and forth between them. Sometimes this confuses readers.
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/166994398-cursed-gardens

There are only six chapters up so far, so I’ll leave it up to you if the first catches your interest?


#56

Added


#57

Thanks in advance


#58

Hi!

I’m just writing this message to let you know I’ve moved your post to the #story-services:critiques-and-feedback Category rather than just the #story-services Category! All it does it make it so your post is easier to find for users who don’t just click on the over all group and search per category instead.

Thanks,
PurelyAliyah :purelyaliyah:
Community Ambassador.


#59

Thanks you person above

And everyone else I am so sorry for disappearing, from now on I will be spamming your book for feedback.


#60

Title: 3S

Genre: Teen Fiction

Ongoing or completed: Ongoing

What do you want me to know: I would like the critique to be PMed please and not in the comments.

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/148103979-3s


#61

Added