Feel free to add you own reviews to this post! I’d love to see what you all make of my style
@SammyWilkonsin - it was great, I got the comment spam, and I just like to hear what ppl think
@WondaGal - It was amazing! I loved reading your reactions in the comments as you read Blood of Darkness! Hope you liked Blood of Darkness enough to stick around and drop some more comments!
@RayLorca - It was good! Particularly your feedback about how my details on ronnie were overloading the chapter. I think it definitely flows better now thanks to you!
@Yenaros - I love your spamming, haha. It is interesting to see what people think of what I have to say and write, and I am truly grateful and happy that you enjoyed. We are truly blessed to have someone like you in our community . Thank you!
@bwttersweet - I was really flattered! You were really sweet and encouraging and inspired me to write more, so thank you.
@Caroline_Wissa - Thank you so much! I really appreciate it and it really motivated me to write more! Thank you
@kukamukies - Very helpful as it seems there’s a trend in my paragraphs being excessively long Also thank you for the compliments, I’m always a bit unsure if I’m getting things across as I tend to go off on descriptive tangents.
@draphy - Thank you so much for your lovely comments! It really lifted my spirits up !!!
@milee_s - I really appreciated it! I think you hit the right balance of positive-to-pointing out flaws. You did a great job
@amelierhys - The feedback was great! I really appreciated your comments and catching some of the mistakes I missed! Thank you again!
@A_Darken_soul - I found your comment spam quite useful! Thank you again for taking your time to read our story!
The way you reacted to many scenes gave great intake on how people see our story from the outside. That along with you pointing out any small mistakes you saw was a wonderful combination.
Even though it’s small, You are doing amazing work! Keep it up!<3
@skyvonwall - I liked it very much because it was very helpful! It feels good to know how to improve to become better.
@Siennafrost - Thank you so much for your hard work! Your encouragement has helped me finish the new chapter and update after 3 weeks of not feeling it. Can’t thank you enough.
@IWJKeller - Thank you for the feedback! It’s quite useful.
@Sergio_the_Saint - The only opinion I have about your critiquing style is that you’re too sweet. But I’ll take that
@eliyeda - Your critique style knows how to lift up the spirit of a doubting writer. Thank you very much!
@LizardQueenDean - Very thoughtful and clear critiques. I found it very insightful. Thank you!
@DavidTLee — Thanks for the praise and thanks for the criticism. You deliver plenty of both.