Hello again everybody! I’m back with more critiques! This time because I’m pretty busy I’m only offering one chapter critiques.
My experience: I’ve been an avid reader and writer for years and have taken countless writing classes throughout my life. I’m also a reviewer for @loveeboat and their wonderful review book so I have experience reviewing work!
What I’m offering: I will read your first chapter and give you what I like, what I don’t like and suggestions on how you can improve. I will also be looking at first impressions, grammar and descriptiveness. I’m always fair, and never mean so don’t worry about that
Payment: Yes unfortunately because I’m very busy, I’ll have to ask for payment. But don’t worry! All you need to do is read 1 chapter of one of my stories! They’re very short (< 600 words) so I don’t think it should be too much. I also have some poetry if that fits your fancy more. For poetry I require at least 4 poems to be read.
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Which story you’ll be doing for payment:
Here’s the link to my profile! Feel free to choose anything that matches you interest!
I can’t wait to read your work! I hope I can help both of us become better writers!
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