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#21

Hi! I’m just writing a romance-comedy called 'Bride In The Voyage. Although it features real life elements and the plot is somewhat relevant to what happened during that time period, I do make up certain features. So you could say that it’s non- fiction and fiction I guess? Anyways, I just wanted criticism on how my book is so far. I’d be happy to read anyone’s book. Thanks for your time!

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/633187433-bride-in-the-voyage-chapter-i-origination


#22

please complete payment and i’ll add you to the queue


#23

done with your critique. hope my suggestions help!


#24

Title: Simple Days
Genre: Science Fiction
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/183698708/write/716117622
Which story you’ll be doing for payment: Jericho


#25

Hope you are able to take me in, I will be releasing my next chapter soon. Feel free to tear me apart or not. It is up to you. I will get to your reading once I am finished with this last chapter.


#26

done


#27

accepted


#28

Hey, just so you know I looked into your story. Its not too shabby. I made some comments and gave you a vote. Hope to hear from you soon.


#29

I’m pretty sure you already read my book for the Blue Rose Awards (The Red Ribbon), so I’ll let you decide which you want to review. So I’ll fill out the form for both of them and you can choose which one to review. :blush:

Title: The Red Ribbon
Genre: Teen-Fiction
Link: https://my.w.tt/gHTSjSGSHV
Which story you’ll be doing for payment: Wandering Stars

Title: Downward Spiral
Genre: Short Story
Link: https://my.w.tt/rsLlLuISHV
Which story you’ll be doing for payment: Wandering Stars

Thank you in advance!

EDIT: I finished payment and left some comments. :blush:


#30

i did i really enjoyed reading your book! accepted!


#31

Aww, thank you! I’m glad you did! May I ask how many chapters you read?


#32

I read 3 for all the stories I judged since I had a lot to read. Unless they were too painful to get through.


#33

Well, thank you for taking the time to judge all those books! I appreciate it!


#34

of course! congrats on winning you deserve it!


#35

Thank you!! :heart::heart:


#36

done with yours!


#37

Title: Longing

Genre: FanFic/Romance (Hope that is okay with you.):orange_heart:
Link:https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/183886763-bucky-barnes-longing
Which story you’ll be doing for payment: Jericho (Sounds very interesting!):green_heart:


#38

accepted!


#39

Title: I Am No One But A Nameless Soul Here
Genre: Science Fiction/Horror
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/717102648-i-am-no-one-but-a-nameless-soul-here-the-end
Which story you’ll be doing for payment: Enlighten Me


#40

Sure no problem! I’ll get right on it!