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#22

Cover:

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/124744275-the-breeders
Genre: Sci-Fi Distopian
Anything Else: Not really.

Thank you so much for offering to do this. :slightly_smiling_face:


#23

Hey, If you have the time, I’d love for some feedback :slight_smile:

Form:
Oh the terrible cover XD
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Link: https://www.wattpad.com/691275400-raising-hell-1-baby-girl-lucifer
Genre: humor, heaven/hell kind of
Anything else: Thanks for the opp. :slight_smile:


#24

Cover:
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Link:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/177482859-merisma-gibborim-draft
Genre: Science-Fantasy
Anything else: Thank you!


#25

Cover:

Link:
https://www.wattpad.com/user/infIorescent
Genre:
YA Fantasy


#26

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Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/150789433-the-lies-that-we-tell
Genre: LGBT/Teen Fiction
Anything else: I don’t think so? thanks for doing this! :slight_smile:


#27

Cover:

Link: click here to read
Genre: Teen Fiction
Anything else: Thanks for your time :relaxed:


#28

WOW that’s super cool, if you still have time could you give me some feed back on my first chapter aswell, it’s fantasy-ish
heres the link for The Girl That Fell From The Sky.
https://www.wattpad.com/684462685-the-girl-that-fell-from-the-sky-black-bird-and-a


#29


https://www.wattpad.com/story/170325205-hearts’-enticed
Genre: Vampire/Romance
I’m looking to see if the first part is very attention grabbing. Things take a bit longer to progress as far as the romance goes because I want there to be a more natural development, so everything is just set up at this point. I just don’t know if the first chapter really makes people want to read more.


#30

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Title: Dark Skies
Link: https://my.w.tt/04PMtpZP7T
Genre: Dark Fantasy and Romance

Thank you :heart:


#31

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Link: https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/75624908-the-proposal-wicked-intentions-currently

Genre: Romance


#32

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Title: Sorcery Ice Slayer
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/169295945-sorcery-ice-slayer
Genre: YA fantasy/sports

Any comment would be nice. Thank you.


#33

https://www.wattpad.com/story/149799241-just-survive
Science Fiction

It’s the end of the world and Mara and Aris are alone and barely surviving. In the beginning, Mara and her mother spent months behind the safe walls of an abandoned school, but with overpopulation, their safe haven turned into a war zone. Though Mara doesn’t know how things went down after she escaped, she knows that her mother never found her like she had promised. Aris, however, spent his first few months in solitude with his younger brother Isaac, but when times became rough, he too lost someone he loves. As they fight internal and external battles, they learn that moving on is the only option, but how will this align with the world in which they live? Can they overcome the obstacles they face as they fight to survive, or will the world break them before they get the chance?20181123_HH2421_0001|512x800


#34

Just Survive

https://www.wattpad.com/story/149799241-just-survive
Science Fiction

It’s the end of the world and Mara and Aris are alone and barely surviving. In the beginning, Mara and her mother spent months behind the safe walls of an abandoned school, but with overpopulation, their safe haven turned into a war zone. Though Mara doesn’t know how things went down after she escaped, she knows that her mother never found her like she had promised. Aris, however, spent his first few months in solitude with his younger brother Isaac, but when times became rough, he too lost someone he loves. As they fight internal and external battles, they learn that moving on is the only option, but how will this align with the world in which they live? Can they overcome the obstacles they face as they fight to survive, or will the world break them before they get the chance?


#35

Story name: Post-Apocalyptic Paradise

Genre: Sci-Fi/Horror

Summary: I wrote this book in order to relate to people who struggle with depression and anxiety. Its a first person story of a young introverted boy who survived for 6 years in an abandoned school bus that broke down on a ruined highway. After the war, Earth had been left devastated and twisted into a world of chemical weather and deserts that span across the globe. Feral humans and mutated monstrosities inhabit this new world and stand in between Wyatt and his search for Paradise. In this Journey we set ourselves to become greater. Together with Wyatt we overcome our insecurities and become the Hero that Mankind needs.

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/115210779-post-apocalyptic-paradise-prologue


#36

Cover

Link
https://www.wattpad.com/story/43800630-blood-dolls-prequel-to-blue-bloods
Genre: Vampire
Anything else: there’s only two chapters but i just want to know if it’s hooking up and not confusing


#37

Link: https://my.w.tt/pnpn5E1y8T
Genre: Teen Fiction


#38

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hi! I have nearly 20 books to check out now and I’ll try to read as many as possible today. I will look at all of them soon, that’s for sure. Just be patient with me, please. I want to give y’all constructive feedbacks. Keep sending your links. :slight_smile:


#39

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Genre: Fantasy
Anything else: Nothing I can mention :slight_smile: I hope you’ll enjoy, and that you’ll be able to help me improve


#40

Title: The Supernova Chronicles
Genre: LGBTQ+ Fantasy
Synopsis:
In the Kalopsian galaxy, Wizards are the dominating race, while Downworlders are hunted and discriminated against. Nova Prescott is a half-Seelie half-Wizard who just wants to graduate her final year of school at Vivera Academy for the Mystic Arts with as few bumps and scrapes as possible. Her plan is quickly derailed when the Queen of the UnSeelies begins to wreak havoc on the Wizarding world, and somehow Nova is the only being capable of wielding one of the most powerful weapons in the galaxy.
While exploring her new and terrifying powers that seem to stem from her being a Hybrid, Nova must band together Wizards and Downworlders alike in order to save her world from dark magic. This proves easier said than done, especially when she’s stuck with a group of bickering Wizards, a Werewolf, a clumsy Warlock, and a pink-haired Seelie girl who makes Nova’s heart speed up far more than she’d like to admit. But, there’s at least one thing they all agree on; Nova’s the key to saving the galaxy.
And for the galaxy’s sake, she really hopes they’re wrong.


#41

What a nice service.

My genre is cozy mystery.

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/177880162/write/692000245

Hope I did this right. Thanks