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#42

RECAP OF WHAT I’VE READ SO FAR:

@leannamattos @Ivy279 @jgrace2197 @Reading_Mermaid08 @whatislive @IrrelevantWorthless @infIorescent thank you for sharing your stories with me. (I left a comment on your books and wish you the best!)

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COMING NEXT:

moving to the next stories in the list now. Keep sending them my way! :blush:


#43

thank you so much for your consideration! :blush:


#44

Form:
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Link https://my.w.tt/VpCybIFc9T
Genre fanfiction, lgbt+
Anything else:


#45

RECAP OF WHAT I’VE READ SO FAR:

@emliarad @_quinta @Stewpidley @Nettenettenet @sarahrreading @DawnSumner000 @sorcerybookclub thank you for sharing your stories with me. (I left a comment on your books and wish you the best!)

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COMING NEXT:

I’ll read the next stories in the list asap. Keep sending them!:heart:


#46

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Link: https://www.wattpad.com/688386718-vermilion-author's-note
Genre: Vampire
Anything Else: Just really looking for some feedback on that first chapter! Be as honest as you want! Thank you so much


#48

RECAP OF WHAT I’VE READ SO FAR:

@nicolettem64 @DanteShadowEater @Amazing_Aims @BiblioWrites thank you for sharing your stories with me. (I left a comment on your books and wish you the best!)

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COMING NEXT:

Special thank you to everyone I wrote feedbacks for. You all have been really nice and it makes me happy to see your replies.:kissing_heart:

As for the next stories in the list, if you don’t mind, I’ll read them tomorrow. I can’t even believe how many different things I’ve read today. Plus, my eyes and head can’t handle it anymore.

I’m still open to reading more, though. Share your books below and I’ll get to them asap! :wink:


#49

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Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/170452706-the-blood-of-queens
Genre: Fantasy
Anything else: this is labelled fantasy but the setting is definitely not a conventional fantasy setting so be sure to take all your assumptions and purge them from your mind before reading :wink:

Thank you so much for this offer! I look forward to hearing from you whenever you have the time.


#50

Wow! Thank you for reading so helping out so many people! Its really sweet of you to take so much of your time to help the community!

Take your time of course but I’d love to get some feedback!

Link https://www.wattpad.com/story/176425273-sierra
Genre Sci-Fi/Cyberpunk
Anything else: I have gotten conflicting reviews that I give too much detail in the 1st Chapter and also not enough detail. I’d love your thoughts on the setup and kick off of the plot.


#51

Hi there! 'd be much obliged for you to take a look at the first chapter of my story.

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Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/178015149-opium-innocence-and-lies
Genre: Dark historical romance
Anything else: I just want to know if the first chapter is any good as far as a “hook”. Like, do you give a crap and have any desire to keep reading? Or maybe no so much? I’m unsure about starting it off the way I have so any thoughts are appreciated! Thank you!


#52

Thank youuu so much! :slight_smile::slight_smile:


#53

Thank you so much!


#54

Thanks in advance


#55

Is the motivational penguin my comment?


#56

noticed you were referring to my post right under yours, but it was not related to your request. I was simply doing a quick recap of the books I had read at that point. p.s. your book was read today, not so long ago actually :wink:


#57

Hello! I’d love some feedback on my first (and currently only) chapter of my ongoing WIP!

Form:
Cover:

cover by @cynoshire
Link: The Eagle’s Arrow
Genre: Steampunk/Adventure
Anything else: I’d love to know what I can do to make my first chapter better!


#58

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Hey there. First of all, thank you for this free service. I really appreciate it. : ) I would love a feedback from you for my 1st chapter. It is a bit lengthy, I hope you don’t mind.
Core Genre: Fantasy
Sub Genre: YA/Drama/Adventure/Comedy/Romance
Episode format.
Link to 1st episode: https://www.wattpad.com/686866308-the-paladins-the-incognito-episode-1


#59

Title: Leather Feather
User: RashidPrime
Genre: Science Fiction
Intro: What happens when a young bat falls in the middle of an intergalactic war between birds and rodents? Not even Pat himself can determine such fate. Good and evil. Bucks and Beaks. Fur and Feather? Those are the symbols of a conflict that spanned our eternal universe. But only one faction will prevail…

Hello! I’m new around here :see_no_evil: Please give this story a read you won’t regret it! It is just the first chapter so far… I’d like everyone to join my little corner and read my stories, see my comics ,and also see my illustrations that I post in my chapters.
I’d truly appreciate it :smile: :smile:
Link 1: https://www.wattpad.com/story/177458562
Link 2: https://my.w.tt/tECPDjwC9T


#60

I’m sorry. I noticed that right after I posted my comment. As I’ve mentioned before I have no Idea what I’m doing. Thank you for your time and comments.


#61

RECAP OF WHAT I’VE READ SO FAR:

@FireAlwaysReturns @broadwaygurl88 @patriciapenrose @naburrito @imtotallynotokay @saeglopur @charlottemallory @Andyjo1 @JCRohrer @FloribundaRomance @Iori_kei thank you for sharing your stories with me. (I left a comment on your books and wish you the best!)

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COMING NEXT:

Just a side note that these gifs are added as a thank you for doing a request. Also, once I like your post here, it means I’m about to read your book.

I see I have a few more people wanting me to check out their stories. I’ll do so tomorrow. Thank you for your patience. P.S. This is stil open if you wanna request.