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Thank you so much for doing this! I would love a review on my YA Contemporary Fantasy story, “Air Born.”

Here is the story link:

Thank you again!


I would like a review on The Price of Beauty - possibly the prologue + first chapter if possible? The prologue is only 800 words.


Hello, if you could shoot some criticism my way it would be much appreciated

Thank you ahead of time :yum:



Give me your best shot, really need feedback, I have only put up 1 chapter so far anyway.

Thanks in advance.