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#183

Thank you so much for doing this! I would love a review on my YA Contemporary Fantasy story, “Air Born.”

Here is the story link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/165654709-air-born

Thank you again!


#185

I would like a review on The Price of Beauty - possibly the prologue + first chapter if possible? The prologue is only 800 words.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/154260159-the-price-of-beauty


#186

Hello, if you could shoot some criticism my way it would be much appreciated

https://www.wattpad.com/story/59531-death-with-a-side-of-clam-chowder

Thank you ahead of time :yum:


#187

Hi,

Give me your best shot, really need feedback, I have only put up 1 chapter so far anyway.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/169703019-eighteen

Thanks in advance.

Leigh