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#62

@YazzWrites
Sapphire Flame


#63

@driftingawood
Mostly Human

My story is rated mature but I promise it’s not for sexual content. If you could read and give feedback, that’d be great! :blush:


#64

Would love a review!

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/167321448-long-goneLong%20Gone


#65

Would love to know what you honestly think of my story. Thanks so much!

Username: juniormint94
Title: Air Born
Link to story: https://www.wattpad.com/story/165654709-air-born


#66

List keeps piling up; that’s some serious reading!

Username - LordBoyar
Title - In Search of Jericho
Link - In Search of Jericho


#67

Trying to see if my story flow is okay so far, can you give feedback on that?

VisualRhythm
Story link: Clipped Mind
13 current chapters


#68

I can, I’ll be sure to keep that in mind while reading :slight_smile:


#69

Thanks!


#70

Username -oceanwriter- book name: The Secret of the Waves
Thank you so much for doing this!
https://www.wattpad.com/story/169484857-the-secret-of-the-waves


#71

@NikkiSHunter

Work: Disorder (Fiction)

Thank you!


#72

@bluecarraway
Record Store Blues


#73

12:01; @averysummers

So I actually have my story on wattpad, but the more edited version is on docs. If possible, would you be able to post the feedback on docs? It’s public, so you only need the link to access. Thanks so much for considering!


#74

@Piotrrad
Story : Dragon Tales: Golden Blood


#75

Thanks, and it’s no problem :slight_smile:


#76

Title: Adventures of Prince Vajendra

Genre: Fantasy

Blurb:
Meet Prince Vajendra, aka the so-called spiritual Rishi of the continent of Vishaputra, a flat earth. He’s a man not interested in saving the world, but having his own adventures. A man that can talk with Gods, deal with flying airships, throw exploding bombs into the air. He must retrieve the powers that an evil Pharoah, named Nahakasha has taken from him. This story goes into a series of episodic sub-plots more than an overarching story.

Which chapter: 1 for start, see how you like it!

**Link:**https://www.wattpad.com/story/169477580-the-adventures-of-prince-vajendra

In terms:
My story has minimal sexual content, but very very minor. Like not even much, there is some cuss words in it - but its nothing major.

Give your honest reaction, did it pull you, do put in reactions, like what you comment I mean do everything you would. Give your honest opinion and did you understand the story?


#77

You would love to read The girl he left behind by @TahliePurvis


#78

I could, but do you mind sending the link through pm? It might take me a bit to get to it and I don’t want it getting lost on here :sweat_smile:


#79

YoItsYeau, Six Feet Under


#80

@NuclearPotatoes
Death with a side of clam chowder

https://www.wattpad.com/story/59531-death-with-a-side-of-clam-chowder

:yum:


#81

Hello! It would mean a great deal to me if you could please give me some feedback about my first novel. Thank you for your time :blush::pray:
Wrong Time by maria_m19
https://www.wattpad.com/story/158420998-wrong-time