I can review your novels in-return for reviewing my own short chapter. I teach creative writing, so I may have some tips/feedback that you find useful. Happy to have any tips sent my way too.
I can focus on a particular area of your book if you’d like, otherwise in general such as; pacing, editing, grammar, etc.
I have been playing with an idea. I have uploaded the first short chapter and would like to know you’re thoughts.
Mostly it is regarding the general idea of the story, and where you think it will go as the chapters unfold, as well as the opening statement, and such.
Let me know the reasons behind your reviews.
I think it is likely for the mature setting, due to the nature of the subject.
If you critique, you can write on the actual book comments itself.
The book is named “So I decided to be a murderer.”
The book is narrated from the authors (character) POV regarding the murders he has committed and whether you as the audience think they were justified.
My other idea is to make it interactive with the audience, so each chapter I would write a poll regarding which undesirable will be a victim and how they will end, for example, a granny beater, death by dogs. From there a tale will be told with each chapter taking place in a new setting, with the exception of one starting place which you will understand once you have read.
Post the link, and let me know what area you would like me to focus on.
Thanks, here is my link.