GET FEEDBACK FROM A WATTPAD STAR (ALL GENRES) *LAST DAY* (ROUND 5)

Welcome to WATTPAD STAR CRITIQUES (ROUND 5)!

Do you need in-depth positive feedback on your first chapter (or a later chapter if we’ve worked together before) of your story? If so, stick around!

For the newbies, my name’s Jenny and I’m very happy to be apart of the Wattpad Star program here on Wattpad!

I like helping up and coming writers strengthen their stories so that they can get and keep as many readers as possible!

Here’s how I can help you!

SERVICE OFFERED:
I will read through all or part of your first chapter (or a further chapter if I’ve critiqued the 1st chapter already) & let you know if I would continue reading or not and why. I give in depth feedback aimed to help you as much as possible! I think knowing whether or not you have a compelling opening hook/premise is critical so I’m happy to give my input.

RULES:

  1. Due to time constraints, I will only accept chapters that are 2k-3k words or less.

  2. I may not finish reading the full chapter. If it doesn’t keep me engaged, I will comment at the point where I stopped and constructively explain why I did.

  3. Please be patient, positive, and friendly! Any type of harassment, impatience, or abuse will result in me declining your request. Response time may vary.

  4. I will let you know if I accept your request by replying to it here.

TIMELINE:
I tend to get back to things relatively quickly but please give me around a week timeline to get back to you.

PAYMENT:

LINK: BOY KING

I’ve just released a new novel on Wattpad called BOY KING. I really would love to share it with new readers here! So please leave genuine, constructive feedback and/or comment with your thoughts on the PROLOGUE AND/OR FIRST CHAPTER (if you’ve already done these, feedback on a later chapter would be great!. Let me know once you comment on BOY KING and I will get back to your story ASAP. **

WHAT I NEED FROM YOU:

Book Title:
Genre:
First Chapter Link:
1st Chapter Word Count:

Looking forward to reading your stories!

STORIES TO BE REVIEWED LIST:

  1. @DanielNgo5 (Finished)

  2. @jspruill1130 (Finished)

  3. @JohnDalvaccio (Finished)

  4. @sweetstory1122 (Finished)

  5. @AllieDawnx (Finished)

  6. @nickjamieson (Story Missing, Please Resubmit Link)

  7. @ERFolsom (Finished)

  8. @Shadow_wonder (Finished)

  9. @Hollie_Wilson (Finished)

  10. @espressoenthusiast (Finished)

  11. @MochaVonBee (Finished)

  12. @CourtneyPeterman0 (Finished)

  13. @Shrylite (Finished)

  14. @AlinaBD (Finished)

  15. @mchuang (Finished)

  16. @Gina-Valerie (Finished)

  17. @naburrito (Pending)

  18. @Geekator (Pending)

Hi, I’m interested!

Title: The Last Woman on Earth
Genre: Sci-fi
First chapter link: https://www.wattpad.com/721853838-the-last-woman-on-earth-book-one-part-0-1-what-do
Word count: 2023

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Hello, I would like to participate.

Title: Claimed by the Sicilian Mafia
Genre: Action
First chapter: https://www.wattpad.com/793555658-claimed-by-the-sicilian-mafia-chapter-1
Word Count: 2296

Thanks!

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Book Title: The Truth About Us
Genre: Teen fiction
First Chapter Link: https://www.wattpad.com/563558141-the-truth-about-us-chapter-one
1st Chapter Word Count: 1250

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@DanielNgo5 Thanks for posting Daniel! Just let me know when you’ve completed payment and I’ll add you to the list!

@jspruill1130 Sounds good! Let me know when you’ve completed payment & I’ll add you to the list :)! Looking forward to reading!

@AllieDawnx Welcome Allie! I’m excited to read some more Teen Fiction! Once you finish commenting on BOY KING I’ll add you to the list!

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I would love to hear some feedback in exchange for some. I’m also new to all of this, so please let me know if my critiques are helpful or not. I’m not used to doing it in a non-face to face format, where I can clarify what I mean.

Book Title: Hurricane Blues.
Genre: Realism
First Chapter: The News Aliens, word count 740

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Hello, it is completed and I left my comment. Thanks!

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I added some comments on BOY KING, and I put it onto my reading list. Good stuff so far.

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**Book Title:**the right one for me
**Genre:**romance
**First Chapter Link:**https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/205211413/write/802178747
**1st Chapter Word Count:**478 words

Looking forward to reading your stories!

STORIES TO BE REVIEWED LIST:
1 the right one for me

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I’ve read your prologue!

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Hello! My name is Phoenix and it would be a really great pleasure if you might give me some feedback in my book.
Title: The painter.
Genre: murder mystery
First Chapter Link: https://my.w.tt/zz2ywhqTn1
Word Count 1st chapter: around 1800 words.

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@DanielNgo5 @jspruill1130 @JohnDalvaccio @sweetstory1122 @AllieDawnx @nickjamieson Added all of you guys to the list! Had a wonderful time reading your comments! Looking forward to jumping into your books! Will notify you once I’ve posted your feedback! I’m also going to follow you guys so we can stay in touch for future revisions or if you just feel like sharing your work with me at a later point :).

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@DanielNgo5 @jspruill1130 Just finished yours! Thank you both for sharing your work with me!

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I think I need the help!
Book Title: SIRENS: ONESHOTS
Genre: fantasy, mythology -based on
the first chapter-
First Chapter Link: here
1st Chapter Word Count: around 600 words?

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@JohnDalvaccio @sweetstory1122 You guys are up next!

Book Title: One Brief Shining Moment
Genre: Historical Fiction
First Chapter Link:* https://www.wattpad.com/801882900-𝐎𝐧𝐞-𝐁𝐫𝐢𝐞𝐟-𝐒𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐢𝐧𝐠-𝐌𝐨𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭-001-𝐓𝐡𝐞-𝐀𝐦𝐛𝐚𝐬𝐬𝐚𝐝𝐨𝐫'𝐬
1st Chapter Word Count:* around 3K

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Of course! I’m happy to take a look & will add you to the feedback list once you complete payment on BOY KING!

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Welcome! I’m happy to check it out! Once you’ve finished payment on BOY KING I’ll add you to the list!